dVerse Poetics — I Prefer Chiclets

Dennis-Waterman-1143989503Dennis Waterman

Too many cups of coffee
too many cigarettes
have stained his pearls
to yellow chiclets.
Call me fickle,
but I prefer their gleam
to the harshness of
flourescent rows of
s
elfie sickness’ glows.

Sarah is today’s host of dVerse’ Poetics.  Sarah wants us to write about yellow.

For those unfamiliar with Chiclets, go here.

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51 Comments Add yours

  1. Sarah Connor says:

    Lovely – very sharp!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sarah!

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  2. kim881 says:

    You made ms smile, Lisa. We Brits are not know for having pearly whites.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Happy to make you smile. I love Dennis Waterman in the TV show, “New Tricks” and found this wonderful photo of him last year when I wrote up a review of the series. Also I wasn’t kidding about what I say in the poem!

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  3. sanaarizvi says:

    Such poignancy in the brevity of your verse, Lisa! Kudos! 💖💖

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Sanaa, thank you very much ❤

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  4. Ha… yes those false white teeth never fools anyone.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      I’m glad you know what I’m talking about!

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  5. Haha! Gotta love this, Li. 😀

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Punam 🙂

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      1. I forgot to mention you took me back to my childhood. We used to get chiclets then and suddenly they disappeared completely.

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        1. msjadeli says:

          p.s. Thanks for the spelling correction on chiclet!

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  6. I don’t know Denis Waterman, but anything to do with selfies makes me feel sad.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      He’s an actor that passed away last year, once known as the sexiest man on television (in the UK.)

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      1. Hmm. If that’s the best they can do…

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        1. msjadeli says:

          As a young man he was quite the hottie.

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          1. I’ll take your word for it 🙂

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            1. msjadeli says:

              LMAO. Now I have to know who you consider to be the sexiest man on the planet (that I can google and look at.)

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              1. I’m not keen on the newest celebrity males. It’s funny but often their eyes are too close together. I do have a soft spot for Hugh Jackman of the older actors, and for dead actors, you can’t get much sexier than Marlon Brando and Paul Newman. Much more classically handsome than men like Ryan Gosling (whose eyes are too close together and who looks a bit dim).

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  7. Ron. says:

    (Slightly) yellowed choppers have always seemed more human to me. I see some “perfect” whites that look computer-generated & fake. Nice work, Lisa.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Eyes are the window to the soul. Teeth are the window to humanity. Your comment is appreciated, Ron.

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  8. rothpoetry says:

    Very creative use of Yellow, Lisa. I love it.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Dwight.

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  9. memadtwo says:

    Too much fakery everywhere. (K)

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  10. Quite clever Lisa! Wonder what he thinks of it? ha💞

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Cindy. If you mean Dennis, he passed away last year.

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  11. Sadje says:

    Good one Li.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Sadje 🙂

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome

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  12. Grace says:

    This made me smile. But sad when I read that he passed away last year.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Grace.

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  13. Oh my gosh, this is brilliant, Lisa. I hate those fake white teeth too! LOL!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Colleen. They feel like a mask that is hiding something to me.

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      1. It’s the same for me with botox. Be who you are.

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  14. I’m with you, Lisa, I prefer natural (yellowish) over screaming white teeth any day!

    I feel there’s a widespread obsession about looks and “beauty”, reinforced by social media and certain shallow celebrities. Not only is it terribly superficial, it’s also causing lots of damage, especially among young people.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      I didn’t know it was causing damage to young people? Are they etching their teeth with whiteners? To me they are a class symbol, as most people in lower socio-economic classes cannot afford proper dental care. I’m guessing that it is cheap whiteners that are harming teeth?

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      1. I was referring to the obsession with beauty overall, not tooth whiteners (not sure whether they are harmful) and many young people trying to live up to an image of beauty that’s conveyed in fashion magazines or through certain celebrities on social media, who apparently don’t know anything better to do with their lives.

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        1. msjadeli says:

          Oh ok, I see what you mean now. We are sold images in every movie, magazine, social media image, etc. Kids used to have heroes to look up to, but they see their heroes turn out to be rotten role models.

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  15. Gillena Cox says:

    Bravo on your yellow response
    Happy you dropped by my blog

    Much💛love

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Gillena. I enjoyed your writing to yellow also.

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  16. Arti Jain says:

    Love it. Not feeling so bad about my less than bright teeth after reading this –cheers:)

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Arti. I’m not a smoker but I drink a heck of a lot of coffee.

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  17. lillian says:

    If you’re familiar with the television series, Friends, there’s one episode where Ross gets his teeth whitened and it’s hilarious! 🙂

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    1. msjadeli says:

      I know the series and the people on it but never watched it. My mom loved it and Phoebe was her favorite. Now you make me want to go see if YouTube has it 🙂

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  18. Brendan says:

    Those yellow pearlies (or, yes, Chiclets) are the part of our unique selves that got lost in the blinding bleached rain of digital imagos … Lively celebration here.

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  19. merrildsmith says:

    This made me smile, Lisa. I know what you mean about the fake white teeth.
    (Also chuckling about your exchange with Jane. ) 🙂
    And I remember chicklets, too!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Merril!

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      1. merrildsmith says:

        You’re welcome, Lisa!

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