
I worked for many years in the juvenile court. Jimmy is a composite. The worker may leave the job, but the children will never leave the worker.
Tanka: An unrhymed Japanese poem consisting of five lines of 5/7/5/7/7. Tanka is generally written in two parts. The first three lines is one part, and the last two lines is the second part.
*Please note that the picture of the boy is one I chose from stock photos and not known to me.
”He was born that way.
Hyper, mean, hitting others.
He’s unlovable.”
–Mother, beaten from the age
of two, until now. Addict.
*
”He’s my first grandchild.
When she’s in jail, he stays here.
I wish she’d leave him.”
–Grandma, drunk, married to drunk.
Grandpa’s in prison for rape.
*
”He will not sit still!
Can’t do his work. Gone a lot.
Needs intervention.”
–Teacher, with 30 students,
half of which fit this profile.
*
”He was a sweet child.
I used to read to him; his
face filled with wonder.”
–Elderly neighbor, who lost
her eyesight, then audience.
*
”He’s my bro for life.
We take what we never had.
You got more, mofo.”
–Best friend, carries a glok 9,
(They’ve done juvie together.)
*
”Young man, you’re hopeless.
You’ve been before me too much.
Boot Camp for two years.”
–Judge, born rich, lives rich (dies rich)
This-that, us-them, quick-fix (not)
*
”Maggots, you will run
10 miles, then scrub 10 toilets!
It’s all you’re good for.”
–Drill sergeant, puts thousands through
transforms to killing machines.
*
”IED’s ahead.
Bomb squad not available.
Troops, move forward now!”
–Lieutenant, given carte blanche
with lives deemed expendable.
*
”Mama? Grandma? (groan)
I remember that picnic
where we were laughing…”
–Jimmy, a good boy, his life
doomed within a small cruel box.

Boom! Hits like a hammer. May I share it on my Twitter feed and on my Facebook page?
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Yes, you may, Angela.
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Thank you! Doing that right now.
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This is so powerful. I feel sorry for the Jimmies of the world.
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me too Dawn. I watched, “The Outsiders” last night, after seeing Jack White was giving money to keep the house that was in it standing. Had never seen it before but most of the people in it went on to become big stars. It speaks to so much of what is in this poem.
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I never saw the movie, but my children read the book in middle school. I agree.
And I see it happen around me so often. 😔
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Oh this just hits hard. So painfully good.
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the children are always the ones who suffer :(
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Wont’t let me like
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sometimes i think word press has technical difficulties… thanks for trying to like :)
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What’s funny is I could like this comment, sighhhh
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