Poetry Day 21 — How will I know?

The title is OctWriPoMo suggested.  One of the suggested forms: If you have poetry magnets it’s time to get them out and play with them. Randomly select words that grab your attention and create a poem from them.

When I

picture you,

smooth music,

fast pedal,

nearly did

ask what next.

Gorgeous recall

let my dream

of you, blue

diamond light,

shine –

a honey moment

of purple beauty.

Let no dream

so blue as

the rose

see need

to do the storm.

Only she

was she

from above.

Ask the next rain

how I know.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      glad you did, thank you

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  1. theusedlife's avatar theusedlife says:

    I also loved the last two lines…Games like that are so much fun, aren’t they?

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      when the words are laid out, a reverse cosmic proofreader takes over ;)

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      1. theusedlife's avatar theusedlife says:

        Oh, I understand 😂

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  2. You did great with randomly selected words.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      thank you. i used a couple more than once

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  3. Surreal, sweet, well-flowing, refreshing, intimate, romantic. Oh, and another: excellent.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      thank you for all of the kind words!

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      1. No, thank YOU for all the beautiful ones.

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