Fandango's One Word Challenge (FOWC), love, music, poetry

traces

Posted by Lisa or Li on

once painted shapes

now fading traces

on the stone path

to the ocean,

reminders of when

our love was alive.

the salt of the sea

reaches to touch them

distant tears that

also remember

 

For some reason, this song comes to mind:

 

FOWC with Fandango — Trace

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  1. The Muscleheaded Blog's avatar The Muscleheaded Blog says:
    November 9, 2018 at 4:04 am

    This one has a beautiful flow to it, and I liked it !

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      November 9, 2018 at 12:09 pm

      thank you. glad you liked it

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