haiku, poetry

#MLMM — haiku: first snow

Posted by Lisa or Li on

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Chevrefeuille’s prompt at Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie is first snow, where it may be a haiku or haibun.  I chose haiku.

 

Pinpricking iced flakes

tap skin – and everything else;

some melts, some doesn’t.

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  1. jeremyjames's avatar jeremyjameshongkong says:
    January 10, 2019 at 6:48 am

    Poetic and true!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      January 10, 2019 at 12:43 pm

      Thank you, Jeremy. I wanted it stay with the nature aspect of haiku — and pull a human into nature as well :)

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  3. Jules's avatar Jules says:
    January 11, 2019 at 8:18 am

    Cold… but true ;)

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