“Excuse me while I kiss the sky”

orange pink sunrise

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Fandango’s FOWC is radiant, the Word of the Day Challenge is appease, and Paula’s 3 Things Challenge words are orange, mosquito, license

The sun was a radiant orange-pink ball rising in the sky when Bea opened the back door. The dew was still on the grass and the birds were almost in a chatter there were so many congregated around the feeders. Bea noticed one of the feeders was empty, so she filled it, which appeased the chorus for a moment. The mosquitos were too laden with moisture to launch an assault, so Bea stood on the back porch, admiring the paradise she was blessed enough to live in. It was a miracle that the overlords hadn’t yet found a way to tax and license nature’s magnificence.

A lyric from a Jimi Hendrix song filled Bea’s heart and she begin so hum to the tune.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks Richa!

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  1. Purple haze all in my brain
    Lately things just don’t seem the same
    Acting funny, but I don’t know why

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I wasn’t thinking of those lyrics. More like these:
      Purple lazer in my brain
      Pouring stories out of my vein
      Need some nature to get high

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      1. I wrote about the mondegreen in my first post today and there is one for this song that goes, “Excuse me while I kiss this guy.”

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          I saw that. Interesting word origin

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  2. Oooh, don’t say that too loud, those overlords are always looking for new things to tax. ;-) My grandmother used to say that those purple/pink sunsets (which were rare in our part of Calif.) were caused when Lady Moon kissed Brother Sun and his blush lit up the sky. ;-) Lovely piece.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      so very cool i will remember that. your grandmother sounds like a neat person

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      1. She was awesome half native american, kind of mystic. :-)

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Just the kind of grandma anyone would love to have <3

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    2. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I just tried twice to comment on your friday fictioneer story and both times it “ate” the comment! That’s the 3rd time today it ate one of my comments :(

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      1. Oh I had that happen too earlier, I wound reposting the whole thing, took it the second time. Thanks for trying :-)

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          You are welcome!

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  3. Great reference there !

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  4. Jules's avatar Jules says:

    Have you been visiting my back yard? You are welcome any time ;)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      You are blessed to look out your back yard and see like this!

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      1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

        Sent you an email with a view…
        I thank my ‘Lucky stars’ everyday.

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  5. Jules's avatar Jules says:

    The colors of sunrise and dusk are beautiful, when the sky cooperates.
    Not too many clear skies this winter. But enough ;)

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  6. pvcann's avatar pvcann says:

    I’ve always loved that line, and you’ve creatively used it.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you PVC :)

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