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#MM Photo Challenge — To where my dreams play

Posted by Lisa or Li on

To_New_Beginnings– Gabriel Isak

 

stealth
arrows
lead me there
to where my dreams
play

 

NEKNEERAJ is the host of Mindlovemisery Menagerie’s Photo Challenge.  Nekneeraj says:
Use above image as inspiration for a poem or short story.

I chose to write a lanturne form poem for this photo.

 

 

10 Comments Add yours

  1. Michael's avatar Michael says:
    July 2, 2019 at 12:34 am

    I like that response Jade, well done.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      July 2, 2019 at 12:39 am

      Thanks, Michael!

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  2. Ergo, the Ogre's avatar The Abject Muse says:
    July 2, 2019 at 9:40 am

    This is good, Jade. Such power in so few words.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      July 2, 2019 at 11:02 am

      Muse, thank you!

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  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:
    July 2, 2019 at 11:14 am

    Succinct and powerful

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      July 2, 2019 at 2:25 pm

      Thank you, Sadje.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:
        July 2, 2019 at 3:13 pm

        You’re welcome Li

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  4. Carol anne's avatar Carol Anne says:
    July 18, 2019 at 12:07 pm

    Awesome! A new poetry form to me! I had never seen one before!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      July 18, 2019 at 12:22 pm

      The Shadow poetry website has a candy store full of forms :)

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      1. Carol anne's avatar Carol Anne says:
        July 18, 2019 at 12:27 pm

        I will have to check it out :-)

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