Carpe Diem #1711 flowers (modern kigo) – Troiku

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depth of a flower
butterfly straw sucks too much
droopy-bottomed flight

flying away with the bee
a yellow fuzzy jacket
shed at hive

some mystery —
why do orange blossoms
taste the sweetest?

 

 

Chevrefeuille is the host of Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.  Chevrefeuille says:
Today I have chosen a modern kigo from Jane Reichhold’s “A Dictionary of Haiku”, from the section Summer, subsection plants … today our theme is flowers. I have a nice haiku for you created by Jane and the task is to create a Troiku with it. (More on Troiku above in the menu). Here is the haiku to use for your Troiku:

depth of a flower
flying away with the bee
some mystery

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  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Good poem.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sadje.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        A pleasure Li

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks Linda :)

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  2. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    I love especially the question ending it (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much. I put my mind in bee mode and that’s what I would ask if I was a bee ;)

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