The Sunday Muse 152 — Moonlight Promise

Turns his head in moonlight shadow
Astral gaze, a promise champing
Pulled, I’m helpless, orbits’ lasso,
Smiles and nods in moonlight shadow.
Walking to our cozy alcove,
Sugarplums of spanking dancing;
Fever pyres in moonlight shadow,
Astral gazes, promise champing.

 

There are so many stories in this man’s face. Today’s offering is in triolet form.
Shay is today’s host of The Sunday Muse.

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  1. Dora's avatar Dora says:

    Many stories indeed! 🔥

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  2. Carrie V. H.'s avatar Carrie V. H. says:

    This is a beautiful triolet and yes you are so right, so many stories in that face!!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks Carrie!

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  3. coalblack's avatar coalblack says:

    Hmm, I’ll just leave you two alone then…. ;-)

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  4. coalblack's avatar coalblack says:

    this is Shay in WP clothing

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      By this name, I’m sure you connect with the story ;)

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  5. hdwoonie23's avatar Helen Dehner says:

    I love the triolet form, it feels almost dainty ~~ and your subject is anything but!! Sugarplums and spanking dancing ~~ oh my!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Glad you enjoyed the form and the contrast between it and the content.

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  6. Beverly Crawford's avatar Beverly Crawford says:

    I love the way you see him. Oh, those sugarplums!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      haha! That just came to me from somewhere!

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  7. Sumana Roy's avatar Sumana Roy says:

    This is delightful. “Astral gaze” well speaks of the stories expressed on his countenance.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much, Sumana.

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  8. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    Bravo in your triolet you have intimated to us as well many stories

    Happy Sunday. Stay Safe

    (✿◠‿◠)

    much love…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Gillena. The photo was irresistible! Happy Sunday.

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  9. Jim's avatar Jim says:

    The moon has many effects, promise clamping may be one. The last one seems as it it may be mutual, a good stopping place for your neat triolet.
    ..

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Jim, it’s actually champing as in champing at the bit, and I agree a good stopping place :)

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  10. Susie Clevenger's avatar Susie Clevenger says:

    What an expression of all the stories eyes can hold.

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