#FF — Posse

FF 010324 muddy-watersPHOTO PROMPT © Dale Rogerson

My mind traipses a fertile terrain. Old friends and family tell me it often wanders too far and for too long. It’s true at times it gets stuck in muddy details, but what part of life isn’t messy when taken to far reaches? My imagination will never be content with geometric, manicured lawns.

The natural progression of cosmic receptivity says that as new things are gathered and synthesized, other things are cast aside to make room. Through mutual, tacit, consent, manicured friendships fade away with equal measures of loss and relief, while my growing posse of mud-loving companions play pat-a-cake.

[100 words]

FF 110823

Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the encouraging host of Friday Fictioneers.

FF reciprocation

50 Comments Add yours

  1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    Love this, Lisa. Wonderful take on the prompt.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Dale I was stuck there for a minute on what to write (see what I did there?) Thanks for the image to inspire and happy you enjoyed the story.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

        He he he… Ya done great! And you’re welcome.

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Neil MacDonald's avatar neilmacdon says:

    I liked the manicured/muddy distinction

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Neil :)

      Like

  3. walkingoffthechessboard's avatar Bruce@WOTC says:

    Life IS messy. Well done, Lisa!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Bruce :)

      Liked by 1 person

  4. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    I got the first one…the second I had to read over a few times…I liked the manicured friendships

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Happy to hear it, Max :)

      Like

  5. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    You’ve drawn a great parallel between this image and life.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Sadje, thank you :)

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re welcome

        Liked by 1 person

  6. Margaret's avatar Margaret says:

    The old gives way to the new. Interesting progression. I like the contrast between the ‘manicured friendships’ and the ‘mud-loving companions’. Great ending.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Margaret, thanks for reading and your comment :)

      Liked by 1 person

  7. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner says:

    I can so relate to this person. Beautiful writing, Lisa.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Gabi, I’m glad you connect with this person, and thank you :)

      Liked by 1 person

  8. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan says:

    You know that Roses grow best in fertilised mud. and so at times does life.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Yes, I do, and I’m proof ;) Thanks, James!

      Liked by 1 person

  9. There’s so much said in this piece you’ve written, Jade.
    I found it to be very powerful in its undelying messages.
    Well done … Happy New Year
    Izzy

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Izzy, much appreciation for your comment. Glad you connected with it.

      Like

  10. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    Old and new combined, in one hundred words, well done

    Like

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much, Someone.

      Like

  11. Great take, great metaphor for this trip we’re all one to a certain extent. Happy New Year to you!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Shrawl, thanks so much. Nice to see you. Happy New Year to you also!

      Like

  12. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Life is messy. Best to embrace it. (K)

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I think you’re right, K.

      Liked by 1 person

  13. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    Manicured/muddy. A great metaphor, and I love the way you interpreted this prompt.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

      The above is Granonine :)

      Liked by 1 person

    2. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Linda, so happy you like the poem, thank you :)

      Like

  14. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    Great rite Lisa – from the time we made mud pies, life continues to be messy 🙌

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      For sure, Ange. Thanks!

      Liked by 1 person

  15. plaridel's avatar plaridel says:

    one of your best. happy new year!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Plaridel, thank you, and welcome back!

      Liked by 1 person

  16. Dear Lisa,

    There’s a lot to be said for the fertile, unmanicured fields of one’s imagination. Lovely write. Evocative and visual.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Rochelle, thank you very much.
      Shalom,
      Lisa

      Like

      1. You are very welcome, Lisa. 💜

        Liked by 1 person

  17. Tannille's avatar Tannille says:

    There is nothing like mud pie between friends! Great stuff, L.

    Liked by 1 person

  18. Beautifully writing, Lisa. So much in only 100 words. I’m with your character. I am drawn to the messy not the manicured kind of life.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Happy you connect with the story, Brenda <3

      Like

  19. Sandra's avatar Sandra says:

    ‘Manicured’ … such a lovely word to use in this context. Well done!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Sandra, thank you!

      Like

  20. Very interesting take on this, Lisa. We all have our messes, don’t we? Nice one!
    Meanwhile, I showed up 2 days after writing my story bc I forgot to link up! LOL!!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Nancy. Been there done that. I will look for you on the FF trail!

      Liked by 1 person

  21. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    Enjoyable musing. The poet in you is shining!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Ha ha! Indeed! Thanks, Someone!

      Like

  22. Anita's avatar Anita says:

    Philosophical take.
    So true. Agree

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Anita, thank you.

      Like

Your thoughts matter.