d’Verse – Quadrille Monday 194 — Red Dragon

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Red Dragon

Smoke smell
fastened, pulled
from valley, I
climb the hill
to barren ash.

Trauma woods
fire-blackened,
uprights flattened.

Bracken-scaled,
flexing talons,
vengeful dragon.

Imagining what
passion called,
where sense
crawled, slack-
jawed madness,
scorched earth
fashion, happened.

Knight pageant,
cannon-wagonned
batten down for fight.

With this, my method was to go to rhymezone, put in imagine and look for rhymes and near-rhymes.

Top image, “Chinese Dragon,” by EdComics

Lillian is today’s host for dVerse’ Quadrille Monday. Today’s prompt for a 44-word poem is imagine.

73 Comments Add yours

  1. You had a dragon too, and how great is that when soon we will be in the year of the dragon.

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  2. Grace's avatar Grace says:

    A dragon inspired Q. Love that fire and passion in the dragon’s eyes.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Me too, Grace!

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  3. lillian's avatar lillian says:

    oooh….loving this dragon! Yours is quite different from the one that appears in Bjorn’s post and the nicotine dragon breath clouds in Kim’s. Lots of dragons today! Great image too!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Cool bit of synching between Bjorn, Kim, and I. Wondering how many more dragons we’ll see.

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  4. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    Wow! Another dragon – and a red one! These lines have a powerful, magical lyricality:
    ‘where sense
    crawled, slack-
    jawed madness,
    scorched earth
    fashion, happened’.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Kim. I like how it turned out.

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  5. calmkate's avatar calmkate says:

    great pic to match you awesome poem Lisa . .. I love dragons!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Kate, thanks much and I do also :)

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      1. calmkate's avatar calmkate says:

        I commented on a few of your videos but not sure you realised it was me … my yt name is @quirkyK8 :)

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Oh, you did!? Sorry I must have missed them. Will try to remember, Kate :)

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          1. calmkate's avatar calmkate says:

            lol no prob, just letting you know it is me …

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  6. Carol anne's avatar Carol anne says:

    Thats fab Lisa :-) I liked the rhymes!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I had fun with it, Carol Anne. Thanks!

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  7. randydafoe's avatar randydafoe says:

    Lisa, not sure how you can make two words evoke so much, “Knight pageant”.

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  8. “Trauma woods
    fire-blackened,
    uprights flattened.”

    Sounds scary, woods I don’t want to be in. You’ve done a great job evoking dis-ease with this piece.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      That dragon is p—– off about something. Hoping the knights can reason with it short of cannon fire.

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  9. Nicely done and the near rhymes work well in this piece.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much Arcadia.

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  10. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    I hope that’s not the dragon that will appear for this Year of the Dragon! (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Yes. Hoping Mother Gaia’s Emissary is a kinder and gentler blue, green, or yellow.

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  11. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    I love it… your poem, your great rhymes, and you colorful dragon. As I was reading it felt like the dragon was really a lava flow from the volcano!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Oh wow, Dwight, perhaps that’s what it is! Thank you for what you see in it.

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        :>) You are welcome, Lisa.

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  12. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Lovely imagination

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  13. I have a bad feeling about those knights…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Hoping they can work it out.

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  14. Jim's avatar Jim says:

    War on the mountain? I like your rhyme and your dragon. Do you belong to the World Dragon Day? I am a member, very quiet member. Several of the writers here belong.
    ..

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Jim! No I never heard of World Dragon Day.

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      1. Jim's avatar Jim says:

        At least for this year, World Dragon Day was January 16. The group is open, you can look here,
        https://www.facebook.com/groups/617925391659630
        I know that Rosemary in the Friday Writings group is, I think about four or five of my Facebook friends are members. It is very small and posting comes by spirts.
        ..

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Thanks for the link, Jim :)

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  15. Wonderful write up 🙏🙏🏽

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, A & S :)

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  16. Great rhyming and that dragon pic is cool but I do hope the year of dragon sees good dragons doing the fire-fighting for us.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Punam!

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  17. ‘I climb the hill to barren ash’
    That’s an arresting image!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Yes it is. I like Dwight’s idea that lava is flowing down the side of the hill and burning the landscape.

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  18. Bill's avatar Bill says:

    Your method worked well, Lisa. :-)

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  19. brazannemuse's avatar brazannemuse says:

    vivid imagination, imagery and image – all great
    💞Suzanne

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Suzanne!

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  20. Excellent, Lisa, and a fab image, too!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Nancy :)

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  21. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    I go to rhymezone, too, for inspiration!
    Love what you did here.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Rhymezone’s on my speed dial, girlfriend. Thanks!

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      1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

        I feel ya!!

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  22. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

    So many dragons today! But I don’t want to be in those trauma woods!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Every wildfire, spontaneously generated or dragon-flamed, is a trauma woods. I think it would be a little warm to walk in right now anyway.

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      1. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

        Not too far from us, we have trauma woods where a tornado swept through.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          The trauma woods are growing. So many fallen trees around here these days.

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  23. Lisa, I love your haunting portrait of destruction and resilience. You’ve really managed to weave together imagery of a ravaged landscape and the looming presence of a vengeful dragon!

    ~David

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, David.

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  24. Dora's avatar dorahak says:

    Vengeful dragon indeed. Almost leaving us with nothing left to destroy. Loved the hammering of images and words. They have a powerful impact.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Dora, thank you.

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  25. So powerful! I am ready to show up for the fight!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Thanks, Kim!

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  26. Carol C's avatar Carol C says:

    Powerful imagining here, Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Carol!

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  27. I’m sure that’s the scariest Dragon illustration I’ve ever seen. 😯

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      A dragon on a rampage is pretty frightening!

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  28. Wonderful post 🌹

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  29. pvcann's avatar pvcann says:

    Well that took me to another place, stirred my imagination

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Happy to hear it. I learned it’s the Chinese New Year Wood Dragon and its ironic this dragon is flaming the forest, but maybe it will allow for new growth this year.

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