Ocean Asks
Ocean asks salt:
I will remember,
but can desire
decay? His dazzle, a
brilliant man of steel,
to old peace of cake?
yes, i know, wrong use of peace, but it was what i had and it fit
top image “Abstract Seascape,” by Julia Bars
brought to you by magnetic poetry poet’s kit
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“Ocean asks salt:
I will remember,
but can desire
decay?”
Love this!🌊
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Thanks, Melissa!
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Good question. Nice art. (K)
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This one put itself together.
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Like I said before…I really like these…the first two lines I really like…plus I like that art.
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Thanks, Max. When are you going to give it a try? (You don’t have to post it!)
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I might do that…no I would probably never post it!
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It is fun. Think of it as a word game. You (or The Oracle) might surprise you :)
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Interesting 👍🏼
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Thank you, Sadje.
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It’s my pleasure dear friend
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The whole thing’s lovely, but yeah, I love this part too:
“Ocean asks salt:
I will remember,
but can desire
decay?”
Mmm…something about it, Li! Maybe you could take that idea and expand it a little, free from the shackles of limited wording. But maybe not. It’s probably perfect the way it is. And yes, I believe desire can decay. Fo’ sho’, lol :)
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Stacey glad the idea caught your notice. Oh yeah, I could definitely expand on it ;)
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Haha. Pun intended 😉
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:)
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Beautiful, dreamy image. 😊
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Gia, thanks much :)
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My pleasure. 🤓
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