#FF — Cursed

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Cursed

Wilmer, last remaining member of his Tribe, died today. He has bequeathed his property to the city, to be used only as a continued resting place for Wilmer and his ancestors. It was they who built sacred stone geometries for funeral rites and other seasonal celebrations.

Mayor Stick makes a suggestion to the City Attorney. Six months later picnic tables are installed.

Dark clouds gather and dwell over the site.

Mayor Stick is soon afflicted with what the doctor calls, “a wasting disease.”

Asleep, the mayor is awakened by DEATH tapping at his window.

Your descendants will die,” it whispers.

[100 words]

FF 092023

Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the host of Friday Fictioneers.

 

40 Comments Add yours

  1. Well that DEATH is a real party pooper. Not at all as much fun as Terry Pratchett’s DEATH

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Tee hee. I wondered if anyone would get the reference :) Yes, this one’s a little more sobering but just as lethal.

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  2. CGraith's avatar CGraith says:

    Gee, too bad the mayor didn’t get a chance to un-install the tables!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I doubt he even realizes the two are connected…

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  3. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    Mayor Stick got stuck. That is what you get when you mess up.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I’m on a run of badly behaving men that meet brick walls aren’t I. Thanks, Max, indeed.

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      1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

        LOL… yea slightly!

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Where’s my little devil emoji when I need it.

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  4. R.M. Carlson's avatar R.M. Carlson says:

    Wow! Interesting and thought-provoking.

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  5. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Betrayal extracts a heavy price. So well written

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Yes it does. I don’t feel so bad for him but I feel bad for the sacred space and for the family the curse was unleashed upon. Thanks very much.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re very welcome. ☺️

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  6. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    Curse from beyond the grave. If only he left them in peace.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I know! The arrogance of the dismissive and unethical knows no bounds.

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  7. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan says:

    Curse from beyond the grave…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, James.

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  8. OMG! Didn’t see that coming. Wilmer and his tribe are not to be trifled with for sure. I hope the Mayor passes on the message he so painfully received.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      It’s a sad situation that the Mayor could have chosen to avoid. I feel bad for his family and for the trampled sacred ground also.

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  9. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    No respect. It’s a rampant disease. (K)

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  10. elmowrites's avatar elmowrites says:

    Mr Stick probably won’t even learn the lesson but I feel for his family, as well as those buried and disrepected

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Jen it surely is a tough situation. Thanks much for reading and your comment.

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  11. Never desecrate sacred land. It will come back to bite you.

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  12. Angela Adams's avatar Angela Adams says:

    Mayor Stick is gonna wish he’d left good enough alone.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Yes he is. A hard lesson to learn :(

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  13. There are thousands of Native American burial grounds here in Minnesota and some of them date back over two thousand years. It’s a felony to disturb them but I’ve wondered how many people ignore that if the sites are on their land because they don’t want to pay to have the site identified. I like your story because it cuts to the chase: mess with the site and don’t mess with anything ever again! Simple!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Good to know about the identified sites in MN, Michael, and I’m sure many more not officially recognized. Thanks for the support on the issue :)

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  14. Margaret's avatar Margaret says:

    That was a big mistake on the mayor’s part. Wilmer’s not to be messed with.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      It’s not like he didn’t lay out the terms in the bequeathment. Silly mayor, thought because Wilmer had passed on he could as he wanted to…

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  15. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner says:

    Somehow I can’t be sorry for Stick, and on the up side, he’s gonna be escorted by the one and only DEATH… I’d love to meet that one too, when my time comes.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      According to the Pratchett legend, DEATH will personally escort you if you’re a wizard.

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      1. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner says:

        I bet Granny Weatherwax has a thing or two to say about that.

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  16. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    Scary story, Lisa. It gave me a chill. The mayor should have heeded Wilmer’s wishes.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Brenda (?) and agree.

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  17. Dear Lisa,

    I guess that’s what he gets for not honoring Wilmer’s wishes. Rockin’ story. ;)

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Rochelle, thanks so much!
      Rock On!
      Shalom,
      Lisa

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  18. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell says:

    Death with more bad news. I love it. Sounds like it was deserved for ignoring his last request.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Laurie, for reading and your comment.

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