24 SSPC 47 — (2nd week) The Beginning of Autumn (Aug 7-21) Risshu 立秋 — Time Benders

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Time Benders

In dreams,
yesterday’s suns
visit. Today’s shadows,
drought’s parched earth, where nothing can grow.
I weep.

American cinquain form

top photo taken on July 13, 2021

Colleen Chesebro is the host of TankaTuesday.  Colleen wants us to include sunflowers in our syllabic poetry this week.

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  1. What a stunning sunflower, Lisa. I love how you juxtaposed the light and the dark with your tanka. 🌻

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Colleen! Like night follows day follows night, so do light and dark follow each other…

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      1. Beautiful, Lisa! 🌻

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  2. brazannemuse's avatar brazannemuse says:

    I see what you mean Lisa – we did… and I love yours … I weep too 💞

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  3. Eugi's avatar Eugi says:

    I love how you contrast dark and light. So beautifully penned, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Eugi thanks much glad you enjoyed it.

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      1. Eugi's avatar Eugi says:

        You’re welcome, Lisa.

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  4. love this amazing poem on each side of the coin, Li❣️

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Cindy love the way you see it. Thank you <3

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      1. You are most welcome

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  6. Gwen M. Plano's avatar Gwen M. Plano says:

    The interplay of light and dark is stunning, Lisa. 🌻

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Gwen, thank you, my friend.

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  7. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    This has a wonderful rhythm, like the turning of a wheel. (K)

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  8. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    Sad poem but I love sunflowers.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I do also, Max. Wish I would have grown them this year but had too much going on and didn’t have time to keep an eye on them.

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      1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

        I always liked them…they freaked me out a little bit as a kid as they swayed in the wind.
        I also love cat tails… why I thought of them all of a sudden I don’t know.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          I can see why they could be scary for a kid. They grow so tall and their faces seem to look down as fall deepens. It’s funny you should mention cat tails. I noticed one out in the front ditch today when I walked out to get the mail and the bins. I like them also. I have read you can eat their roots if you find yourself lost and hungry.

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          1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

            I never heard that…I always saw them in watered areas like ponds. They always facinated me. I would love just to grow some….I’m not sure if that is possible or if you can just plant cat tails.

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            1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

              I don’t know if you can plant them but they have to have their feet in the water or wet just along the shore. Have you ever unraveled one of those “tails”? Those things pop out like fireworks!

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              1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

                No I haven’t…now I will have to!

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                1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

                  do it out in a field or far from your house. it really goes nuts

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                1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

                  wow, that’s cool. I see on the list of companion plants are pitcher plants. After seeing those ones at the gardens I would love to try and grow some.

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                  1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

                    Oh I really liked those pitcher plants! I meant to tell Jennifer about them.

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  9. destiny's avatar Destiny says:

    beautifully poignant, Lisa 🤍

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Destiny <3

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  10. balroop singh's avatar balroop2013 says:

    However, sunflowers don’t care for shadows, they keep turning their heads!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Balroop, I love that! Another thing to love about them.

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  11. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    A very evocative poem my friend

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Sadje, thank you, dear.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re very welcome

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  12. Gorgeous sunflowers. I love how they always ‘look on the bright side of life.’ 🤓

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  13. Jules's avatar Jules says:

    We had a few warm days… but now we are getting small short rain spells. It has been gray most of the day.

    If I could send you some rain…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Jules, I think you did. We got sheets of rain at least half of yesterday and it was raining heavy again last night. Thanks :)

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      1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

        Hopefully it was there was enough to feed the roots and not just wash away… :)

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Yes, it was. It was a soggy walk to the mailbox. Everything’s looking and feeling good and growing — especially the grass. Gotta mow tomorrow.

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          1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

            Fun, fun, fun. We don’t do our lawn all in one day. The back and gully are ready for a trim also.

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  14. I’m weeping with you, Lisa. Great poem!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Yvette <3 :)

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  15. Wow, this is a heavy verse, Lisa. Perfectly executed – really sad…

    ~David

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, David.

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  16. A wonderfully evocative but sad poem, Lisa. Praying for nourishing rain with you.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      D, thank you very much for the kind words and the prayers <3

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