dVerse OLN — little patters (tanka prose)

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and don’t forget Chessie” by Viennese artist, Guido Gruenwald

Little Patters

rain patters through dusk
like long-gone feet of toddlers’
playtime before bed
memories of clean Pjs,
oft-told stories, nodding heads

The image I chose today to accompany the tanka has sentimental value. My stepdad worked for the C&O Railroad for many years and retired from there. I happened across this image back when my own two sons were young and so were my two nephews. The two little boys reminded me of my nephews but also of my sons when they were a few years younger. I found a place that sold the image on tin and gave it to my folks for Christmas one year. When I hear the pattering of the rain on roof, I remember those days of little feet pattering across the floor.

If you want to learn more about the artist and how Chessie the Cat became a trademark for the Chesapeake and Ohio (C&O) Railroad (now known as The Chessie System) visit this link/pdf at: The Legend of Chessie

Lillian is today’s host of dVerse‘ Open Link Night. 

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32 Comments Add yours

  1. Love your tanka, Lisa, and the precious memories. ♡

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Nancy, thank you and yes they are precious memories <3

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  2. What a sweet memory Lisa. I love the old advertisement to go with your lovely Tanka ☺️💕

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Things were different back then, weren’t they. Thank you, Christine <3

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  3. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    That takes me back to a great time….and tired time. Love the story and the picture.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Max, I know what you mean. Glad you enjoyed them, and thank you for always supporting my work.

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  4. Carol C's avatar Carol C says:

    Beautifully done, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Carol, thank you very much.

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  5. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    I love it Lisa. The picture is precious. What great memories.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Dwight, they looked just like that back then <3

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        Our two little boys did also… now they are 50+!!

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  6. I remember those days of pattering feet, Lisa. Life is a series of changes, isn’t it?

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      It surely is. It’s probably good we don’t realize how quickly the changes happen while we are experiencing them. It seems like they were little forever, but it was in the blink of an eye.

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      1. I know, time speeds up as they grow 😂

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  7. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Such a sweet poem and I loved the back story of this image Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Sadje, thank you <3

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You are most welcome

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  8. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    A tenderly written tanka, Lisa, spilling with sweet memories.  I still love the smell of clean pyjamas when I spend time with my grandsons.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Kim, thank you, and grandparenthood is a gift from the powrs tha be for getting through parenthood ;) Your grandsons are very lucky to have you for a gramma also.

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      1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

        My pleasure, Lisa, and thank you.

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  9. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55 says:

    Short and sweet, Lisa, a memory savoured…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Andrew thank you. The golden days <3

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  10. lillian's avatar lillian says:

    Love the image. Love the tanka. BUT, I JUST managed to close my mouth…my jaw dropped and I was gawking at the name of the artist for this image….my maiden name is Gruenwald!!! I MUST look up this artist!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Lillian, are you serious!? Talk about synchronicity! Did you visit that link about Chessie? It talks about the artist. Please share what you find about him, will you?

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  11. glyn40wilton's avatar glyn40wilton says:

    That’s lovely, Lisa

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Glyn. It was nice to reflect on those times.

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  12. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    I had to smile to see Chessie. I still have Chessie playing cards from my parents. I wish I still had my stuffed Chessie cat though…

    And I’m smiling to think of my own children when they were young, too. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I’m glad this connected with you, Kerfe. Happy to make you smile.

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  13. sanaarizvi's avatar sanaarizvi says:

    Love, love this, Lisa! I especially admire this part; “rain patters through dusk like long-gone feet of toddlers.” 💖💖

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sanaa. And did you see the artist’s connect with Lillian? Too strange and wonderful.

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  14. crazy4yarn2's avatar crazy4yarn2 says:

    That is so sweet!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Nolcha!

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