PHOTO PROMPT © Lisa Fox
Night Hunter
July tourists and townies imprint on sugar sand until it is dappled like elephant skin. Sol, melted butter in the clouds, toasts the water golden. Gulls toddle, amongst toddlers to seniors drowsing on terry, seeking out dropped chips or buns. Nobody pays notice to the beach junk driftwood, sticks, and feathers.
At dusk, adults pack up chairs, coolers, inflatables, frisbees, and other summer paraphernalia, cooling bodies wrapped in wet towels, arms full, as they trudge to their vehicles.
It is only then that Godzilla rises, shakes off, and goes hunting down the long, empty strand for hot-blooded, distracted lovers.
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Rochelle, thanks for choosing my pic this week. Looking at it today, I see it with new eyes.
Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the host of Friday Fictioneers.
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I had such a sense of late summer beach time visits with all the imagery… then the surprise ending. Brilliant!
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Steve, thank you. The photo has a magic about it and I’m loving the stories coming out of it.
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You’re welcome, Lisa.
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A beautiful picture painted with word that slowly moves from idyllic to chilling. And Godzilla knows what it does.
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:) Thanks, Gabi!
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Perfect for Halloween. :D
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Thanks :)
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Whoa! That took me off guard.
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Oops! ;)
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😂
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Selective! (K)
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Whoa. I never saw that twist coming. Great take!
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Shweta, thank you :)
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Moral of the story, don’t fall in love at the beach.
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Or if you do, don’t stay after dark! ;)
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That last line wasn’t what I was expecting 😱
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Sadje when I looked at the pic today, I saw Godzilla, sorry :)
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No worries 😌
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Beautiful imagery and word play. I didn’t expect the idyllic setting to end in gore. Great twist.
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Joy, thanks much! Happy Halloween!
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Adds my praise for the lovely imagery. The conjunction between the lyrical and the horrific was jarring
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Thanks much for the feedback, Neil.
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Oh my, this is SO good Lisa! I’ve got a beach at the end of my road. I’ll bear this in mind when I next go for an evening stroll!
Great picture. It initially looked like a shipwreck, there is a scene very similar to this near me, where where a Dutch cargo ship, The Amsterdam ran aground in the 1700’s.
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Thanks much, Keith. Yes, please do be careful on evening strolls. If not Godzilla, could be Dracula is afoot as well. Thanks on the pic :)
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Beachzillah! Shiver me sandless!
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:)
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Love the Godzilla reference– fun !
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:)
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Whoops, thank you for the warning. No more hot nights snuggling on the beach for me.
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LOL
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Great line in melted butter in the clouds… and of course I love the Godzilla reference! He is my man/monster.
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Glad you liked my spooky tale that started out so innocent.
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Yes it did start off like that…
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before the monster hit, i was sidetracked by the beauty of the scenery portrayed. well done.
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Thanks, Plaridel. You were distracted. Good think Godzilla wasn’t around! ;)
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A beautifully poetic and evocative beginning only to be flipped on our backsides with the end!
You do this so well!
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Dale I enjoy setting readers up ;) Thanks, Dear.
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Yes you do! And you d it so well!
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Fabulous sense of summer days and lazy beach times and then, boom that last line. Terrific work
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Thanks, Laurie! Sorry for late response. Been on hiatus.
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Dear Lisa,
Evocative piece that had me digging my toes in the sand. And oh that ending. I didn’t see that coming. Great picture. Vivid story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle, thanks much. Sorry for late response. Been on hiatus.
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To be fair, humans disrupted Godzilla’s sleep first. It’s only fair that he disrupts their day at the beach.
Thanks for the inspirational picture.
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What an ending, your so talented at writing flash fiction! Well done!
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Thanks much, Carol Anne.
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