dVerse — Prosery Monday — Faith

As a seed, I was shot out the back end of a blue jay
when, heedless, she flew over the meadow.
–Lisa Bellamy, from the poem, “Wild Pansy.”

Faith

As a seed, I was shot out the back end of a blue jay when, heedless, she flew over the meadow. Shivering in a watery mess that dried to dust, winds lifted and carried me to Brick City, where the only place for purchase was broomed dirt between cracks.

Not sunflower, a large, oily favorite, but mustard, I was a speckle exposed to elements unfavorable to germination. Would I remain unrecognized potential that’d never be?

The first drop landed on me; I jumped with surprise. My jacket now wet, I was carried along rivulets, heading downhill. I ended in a puddle near a stone fence by a small cafe. Cloudburst now ended; sunshine reigned.

Lying there, refreshed and warm, my first experienced joy burst me open. My little feet dug in.

Weeks later, a small child noticed me.

Mama, look at the pretty flower!”

 

top image:  The Spruce / Evgeniya Vlasova

Sanaa (aka adashofsunny) is today’s host of dVerse’ Prosery Monday. Sanaa says:
write a 144-word story using the given quote.

39 Comments Add yours

  1. sanaarizvi's avatar sanaarizvi says:

    This is incredibly poignant, Lisa. I love how seamlessly the line from Bellamy fits right into the prose piece. The closing image made me smile ❤️❤️

    Thank you so much for writing to the prompt 🥂

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Glad you like the story, Sanaa. Thanks for the creative prompt <3

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  2. I love the thought of that seed with a mind of its own manage to grow into a pretty flower.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      <3 I do also. Thank you, Dear Bjorn.

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  3. Really liked the Ugly Duckling aspect of this warm little tale. Andersen would be proud…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Ain, I love how you see my poem. Thank you <3

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Nancy :)

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  4. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    this is gorgeous. What a beautiful end to this seed journey

    much♡love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Gillena, thank you so much <3

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  5. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    That brings a smile and great song to go with it. (K)

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  6. authorstew's avatar authorstew says:

    Ah a little mustard seed to bound to grow up so that even the birds of the heavens will roost among it’s branches. 😊 Great prose.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Nicely put, Stew. Thank you.

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  7. This made me smile a big smile.🌸

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      I’m glad, Melissa. <3

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  8. crazy4yarn2's avatar crazy4yarn2 says:

    Awww, so sweet, Li!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, Nolcha.

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  9. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    A sweet story and a wonderful ending! Well done, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Dwight, I’m glad you liked the story. Thank you.

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        You are very welcome, my friend!

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  10. M Jay Dixit's avatar M Jay Dixit says:

    Heartwarming journey and perfect ending!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Jay, thanks so much :)

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  11. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    Everyone needs faith, even a mustard seed, Lisa, and I enjoyed your first-person perspective and journey. I felt sorry for the seed ‘shivering in a watery mess that dried to dust’ and the carried along rivulets, and happy when it ended as a pretty flower that was noticed – I agree with Ain.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, Kim. She had quite a journey, didn’t she.

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      1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

        My pleasure, Lisa.

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  12. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Aww, a sweet story

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  13. A delightful journey of hope! Thanks!

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  14. Carol C's avatar Carol C says:

    That little seed accomplished its purpose! :D

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  15. SelmaMartin's avatar SelmaMartin says:

    happy even when a tiny human notices. Happy to be alive. Nature is so generous. Thanks for the lovely imagery Lisa. Gorgeous.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Selma thanks for reading and your thoughtful comment <3

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  16. Aw, what a sweet prosery, Lisa! I loved it!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Yvette, pleased you loved the poem, thanks <3

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  17. Lisa, this is earthy, tender, and full of surprise!

    Much love,
    David

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Positively green, David. Thanks!

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