POPO 2025 — Day 22 — Finally Noticed

Finally Noticed

At the gardens
at the koi pond
appreciating shade
I look up to see
a stand of dawn redwood
surrounding me.
How many times have
we walked the curving path
to marvel at stacked boulders
giving water its falling form,
watched calico swirls
gather tasty pellets
without noticing the trees?

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  1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    Very nicely done, Lisa. If you don’t look up you don’t see the trees.

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  2. Steve's avatar Steve says:

    Reminds me of a saying I read once, many years ago, urging people to keep their drapes open, “lest you miss seeing the majesty of the sky” or something close to that.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      That’s a good one.

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      1. Steve's avatar Steve says:

        Yeah, I wish I could remember the actual wording though, as it was more poetic…

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