dVerse Haibun Monday — November Rain

Pale lines and dry, rough edges have shifted landscapes from colorful contours of a month ago. Unable to sit with daylight gaze fixed upon them, and shut out from night’s shadow view, the transition has been so incremental as to seem stealthy. Once presence of mind stills scrolling eyes, a series of sequential moments brings epiphany that fall is fully engaged. Not only, but it has almost passed.

Weather reports say it will snow day after day later this week; yet the time of towering snowbanks at Thanksgiving are over. Even a dusting is welcomed to join us for dinner.

november rain falls
cold portends for tomorrow
with warm gathering

Frank Tassone is the host of dVerse’ Haibun Monday. Frank says:  Today, let’s bear witness to the power of transformation. Write your haibun about, or alluding to, transformation, however you perceive it!

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  1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    A stunning descriptive haibun, Lisa, with a distinctive transition. We’ve already had snow here, so I sympathise, but also envy the warm gathering,

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Kim, thanks so much. We have had a few snows but nothing stuck. I wonder if this will?

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      1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

        My pleasure, Lisa. Our snow is gone and it’s just rain now.

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  2. We had our first snow last week, but now it’s gone again. Hope for a very nice gathering for you.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks for the well wishes on the gathering. Most stuff is bought for the gathering on Friday. Older son has (secret) plans for Thursday. ::fingers crossed:: that he’s sharing the day with someone nice.

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  3. This is an excellent haibun and observation, Lisa. Seriously, if it rains or snows, I’ll be happy. Our lack of moisture this summer/fall has been abysmal.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Colleen, thank you, and I agree.

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      1. You’re welcome, Lisa.

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  4. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    A very good haibun, Lisa. A white Thanksgiving would be great! It will be in the sixties here! :>)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Dwight, thank you. I decided to go a little metaphorical in this one.

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        Seems to have worked very well.

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  5. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    Luv the contrasting tones of warm and cold having tgeir rightful places in your haibun

    Thanks for dropping by my blog

    much♡love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Gillena, and you’re welcome.

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  6. These words invite me into a November not experienced in our part of the world, and I was well able to engage. Thank you, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thank you so much, Dennis.

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  7. crazy4yarn2's avatar crazy4yarn2 says:

    We might get snow tonight. Winter wants to join us for the holidays.

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  8. an evocative portrait of Autumn in transit! Brava, Li!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, Frank.

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  9. Ron.'s avatar Ron. says:

    Haibunilicious work, Li. We’ve had maybe 6-8-inches and about half of it stuck, soo…. Thanks for sharing!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Ron. Don’t you live in the mountains? That’s a lot of snow that is sticking.

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  10. bruce@ssa's avatar bruce@ssa says:

    Nice to see November Rain featured here, Lisa. Guns N’ Roses just announced some tour dates in North America for 2026 earlier this week. No snow for us yet. Take care of it for us unti it is our turn…IF we get a turn. ❄️

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      So awesome about Guns N’ Roses touring again. I know Slash has steadily been making music but didn’t know what the other band members had been doing. It’s cold enough out there today to snow but only rain so far. Maybe it will skip you :)

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      1. bruce@ssa's avatar bruce@ssa says:

        Well, I actually like snow between now and New Year’s. After New Year’s, I can very much do without it. So, if you get any “extra” over the next few weeks go ahead and forward it!😄

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

          haha will do, Bruce.

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  11. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Beautifully written

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Sadje, thank you <3

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome

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  12. Stunning haibun Li with such vivid descriptions. I hope you enjoy your day :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Di, glad you enjoyed the poem and yes, I did, thanks :) Back at ya!

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  13. I had such an experience of surprise at a seasonal change that seemed to have happened overnight but must have been ongoing for a few weeks. Laughed at my own astonishment!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Petru, for sure :)

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  14. Dr Banerjee's avatar Dr Banerjee says:

    What a gentle gut-punch of a haibun, Li, you’ve captured that sneaky slide from autumn’s blaze to winter’s hush so perfectly it had me peering out my own rain-lashed window here in the grey north. Those pale lines creeping in, the epiphany hitting like a half-remembered dream, it’s all too real, isn’t it? And that haiku, oh, the way the cold rain whispers of tomorrow’s chill while cradling the promise of warm plates and laughter round the table, it lingers like the last sip of mulled wine. Makes me miss those towering snowbanks of my childhood Thanksgivings, proper proper. Thanks for the nudge to notice the shift, love, and for hosting such a cracking prompt. I’ll be scribbling my own transformation tonight, rain tapping along. Cheers from across the pond.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      What a lovely comment, Dr. Banerjee, poetry in and of itself. Stay warm in the grey north across the pond.

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  15. Wonderful haibun, Li! I hope to hold off on snow for now.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Hope it stays clear for you, Sara. It’s been snowing steadily all weekend — I’m snowed in!

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  16. pvcann's avatar pvcann says:

    For me this was a beautiful contemplation on paying attention, attending to the past experiences and noting the present and being in the moment.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      That works for me <3

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