dVerse OLN 401 — Lost Again

A Public Garden with People Walking in the Rain
Vincent van Gogh

Lost Again

A snapshot may form an opinion.
For example, you may think fool,
you’re getting wet out there even
in friendly oblivious conversation.

Heads and tails are important.

We are marveling after long wait,
able to be in the gardens again
after white slates melt to puddles
falling from sky. Friend, oh why

you’d deny yourself for trickles,
trifles? Shiny pathways wind us
in banter, dungarees, galoshes;
revived, delighted in community.

Björn is today’s host of dVerse’ OpenLinkNight. Remember, this Saturday at 10 a.m. NYT we have our February LIVE dVerse, where you see and hear poets from the pub and read one of your poems among friends.

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  1. Carol anne's avatar Carol anne says:

    so lovely Li a very beautiful poem! 💜💜

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  2. Marja's avatar Marja says:

    Beautiful Love the last stanza which is almost like an invite to the shiny pathway, just dressing for the occasion.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      :) It is, Marja!

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  3. It is that community that matters most in the end I think

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  4. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Lovely poem Li

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  5. Helen's avatar Helen says:

    Heads it’s raining .. tails, it’s dry … loving your poem … my oh my!!!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      fun poem, Helen. Thanks :)

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  6. Having “community,” even just a community of two, to walk with can make all the difference!

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  7. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    So much joy in these words. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      <3 You know I was thinking of fmg. We planned on walking outside this past Tuesday but they still have it closed off.

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      1. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

        Spring is coming…

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  8. sanaarizvi's avatar sanaarizvi says:

    Gorgeous, gorgeous writing, Lisa! 😍

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Sanaa, thanks so much <3

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  9. This is one of my favorites by just the opening line… “A snapshot may form an opinion.” THAT is great.

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  10. Li your words and the art took me there to that street. It was an unusual feeling like I had traveled in time almost. The power of words is sometimes extraordinary isn’t it? ❤️☺️

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Christine, yes on the power of words. Thank you for your lovely comment <3

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