#FF — My Mother and I

PHOTO PROMPT © Lori Wilson

My Mother and I

In 1975, my father spent his junior school year in Cuba* as an Argentinian exchange student. He worked as a dishwasher at Shelly’s, named after the owner’s daughter, my mother. A year later I was born – in the laundry**.

Grandpa kept us there until I was three. Sisters looked after me while my mother scrubbed linen of the folks who lived in the suburban hills. The nuns never smiled, but my mother always did.

Back home, Grandma’s eyes shone with tears. I screamed when Grandpa tried to hold me.

That night, my mother emptied the safe and we headed South.

[100 words]

*Cuba is the town this diner is located in.

**There were Magdalene Laundries operating across the globe. Learn more about them here.

Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the host of Friday Fictioneers.

61 Comments Add yours

  1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    Oh, that is a tough one, Lisa. Thankfully, the mother was smart enough to leave immediately, not questioning why the little one screamed.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Dale, thank you. Can you imagine locking your child away for over 3 years because she got pregnant and then expecting everything to go back to “normal” afterwards? I hope Shelly finds her babydaddy. Good point on the little one sensing toxicity in the grandpa.

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      1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

        No, I cannot. And I hope she does, too. Kids just know. And thankfully, Shelly took that as the last drop.

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  2. Dear Lisa,

    What an intricate story you wove in 100 words. I knew the cafe was in Cuba MO but knew nothing of the Magdalene Laundries. Interesting!

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Rochelle, I learned more about them when I researched them for a guest post on another blog via Joni’s song. Thank you, Shalom, Lisa

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  3. I don’t want to be pernickity in the face of all that horror, but did the mother rob her parents or the nuns?

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      They were “back home,” so I’m guessing she robbed the parents via their safe in the home or at the restaurant. Thanks for asking, Neil. Hope that clears it up?

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  4. Sandra's avatar Sandra says:

    The Magdalene laundries – a horror story in themselves. Loved this story, Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Sandra, thanks so much. Just when you think paternalism can’t sink any lower, it does.

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  5. I knew a lady who lost her first born to a Magdalene Laundry. She had more kids but always felt broken inside for what those evil swine did to her.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      My stomach lurches at the thought of it. It really takes paternalism beyond evil, when you are able to manipulate other females [i.e. the nuns] to torture females on the behalf of a religion. I’ve read where some said the nuns “thought they were doing right in saving souls” just like they said it about Indian boarding schools, but that’s BS. Nobody with a heart or soul would have done what they did. I feel so bad for the lady who lost their first born to one.

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  6. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    A great story, Lisa. At first it thought this was your story, but then realized it was flash fiction.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Dwight, thank you very much.

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        You are welcome.

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  7. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    A child is always a blessing. But our culture has so many ways of turning it into a curse…(K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      You’re so right, K.

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  8. Steve's avatar Steve says:

    Wonderful short fiction, Lisa. As I read, “The nuns never smiled, but my mother always did” I could see this going down a path that evoked your brilliant write-up on “The Magdalene Laundries” on Randy’s blog. Here’s that post for anyone who hasn’t seen it: https://mostlymusiccovers.com/2026/02/14/herstory-in-harmony-joni-mitchells-the-magdalene-laundries/

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Steve, thank you very much and I appreciate you sharing the link to that post :)

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      1. Steve's avatar Steve says:

        You’re welcome, Lisa, it is a terrific post and needs to be read. 🙂

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

          I will be posting it here at Tao-Talk soon.

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  9. It never ceases to amaze me how we all see something different in the images and can come up with inspired stories such as yours, Lisa. My blood ran cold reading about the Magdalene Laundries. Horridic!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Nancy, totally agree how each of our imaginations go to work on an image.

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      1. You wrote a compelling story.

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  10. gc1963's avatar gc1963 says:

    I will remember this story for a long time

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Geeta, thank you very much.

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  11. Will's avatar Will says:

    That is a frightening historical piece. Great story.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, Will.

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  12. Brilliant story, Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thank you very much, Miriam.

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  13. Carol anne's avatar Carol anne says:

    those women who survived the magdeline laundries they were so strong, they had it tough, a tough life, great story Li :-)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      CA, yes they were and yes they did. Thank you :)

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  14. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Lovely story Li

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Sadje, thank you.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re very welcome

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  15. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    Brilliant write Lisa – I am amazed that this intricate story came out of the photo – ‘Magdalene Laundries’ the name had such a pleasant feel to it who would have guessed the horror of it all 💔

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks so much, Ange <3

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  16. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz says:

    Magdelene Laundries- I love how you worked that little bit of tarnished history into this! great write.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      V, thank you very much. It’s been on my mind a lot lately (the use, abuse, exploitation, subjugation of females)

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  17. James Pyles's avatar James Pyles says:

    I had no idea about the Magdalene Laundries. Definitely a black mark in the history of the Catholic Church.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      James, happy to have made you aware. Just to be fair, they started out as Protestant institutions.

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  18. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan says:

    An escape and on the run, good luck to them.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Amen to that, James.

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  19. seanatbogie's avatar seanatbogie says:

    The story of a great escape! A good fun read Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thank you. I hope they find her father.

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  20. elmowrites's avatar elmowrites says:

    Took me a minute to put this all together, but once I did, I loved (hated) it. There must be something in the air as so many of us have written about men doing disgraceful things to women this week. Maybe it’s the news.

    I’m glad your characters escape.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Jen, I think you’re exactly right about the evils men (and women — the nuns!) have done upon the vulnerable. I’m glad they escaped also, and I hope they find her father…

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  21. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall says:

    Really, really interesting, Li. I knew a bit about the unmarried girls and what happened back then. I am still finding what happened to my grandfather’s sister. Her name was Mary Hall, and she disappeared when she was about 20 years old and no one would talk about her again. She had been still alive when I was about 10 years old and I had been earwigging between my dad and my grandfather. I had said nothing at the time, but 50 years later myself and my cousins have been trying to piece up what had happened. Much to do!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Oh Chris, hard to know how this has affected you and your cousins. I sincerely hope you piece up what happened. Could she still be alive?

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      1. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall says:

        We are all fine. Mary couldn’t be alive. She would be about 120 years old…

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  22. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner says:

    The Baby is lucky to have a mother like Shelly. What a sad family she had. I’m sure it got better for both of them.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Gabi, yes she is blessed. Thanks for your thoughtful comment.

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  23. What a story, Lisa, I leave a little wiser.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Keith, thank you so much.

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  24. Wow! That was quite a tale packed in 100 words. Thanks for the link about the laundry. How horrible.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Russell, thanks so much. You are welcome. Yes, it is.

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  25. Love the historical fiction nods.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Dawn, thanks much!

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  26. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell says:

    Oh, so much layered in here with such simple lines “kept us here”
    Sinister. Glad they got out of there

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Laurie, thank you for your generous, thoughtful comment.

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