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The Best Kind of Rap
On the couch, snuggled in a throw, sipping a mug of Bailey-splashed hot rooibos tea, I listen to Roy Orbison sing, “Only the Lonely.” I feel abandoned by the present and sense no future. Snowflakes drift by outside, a flurry of past memories reminding me of what will never be again. Laughter, gentle touches, mountain vistas, scent of fresh cedar…
My reverie’s interrupted by sharp rapping at the door. Package delivery? The peekhole reveals Barb’s bright, shining face.
The opened door shows that behind her are the rest of our book club friends, holding bottles and bags.
“Hey Girl! We’re here to party!”
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Note: I am not feeling depressed, but I drew from times that I was to write today’s story. If you’re feeling this way, and no wonderful friends rap at your door, please seek a friendly voice at a helpline. It can make all of the difference.
Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the host of Friday Fictioneers.
Tao-Talk 
Loved this!
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Thanks, Cheryl! Glad you do.
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I’m not anonymous😄
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:)
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Nice story and great advice!
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Nancy, so happy you feel that way. Thanks :)
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Very welcome, Li.
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When friends call , the mood lifts. Nothing like good company to cheer everyone up.
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So true, James. Thank you.
About changing the ending of your story, I hope you consider putting it back the way it was.
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Thank heavens for book clubs and for books
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YES
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Friends are indeed our lifeline. (K)
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<3
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Where can I find friends like that :)
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:) Google book clubs near me.
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Lovely story! Girlfriends are lifesavers, I tell you.
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Joy, thanks so much, yes they are!
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Beautiful storytelling with a message!
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Thanks, V! :)
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A touching tale with a heartwarming conclusion. Nice one, Lisa
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Keith thanks very much.
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Oh, I know that type of feeling where we could easily wallow. How wonderful to have friends to ensure we do not remain in tha slump! Beautifully done… Now… how to get that song outta my head?
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Dale, which song???
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Only the Lonely!
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Oh right, sorry, it’s been a long day out of the house. I should have waited until tomorrow before signing in. Now you have me singing it lol
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Hahah! I had to go up and check because I could no longer remember! So sorry!
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No worries. I appreciate you, my friend.
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The feeling is mutual!
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<3
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💞
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This story has a happy ending.
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Yes! :) Happy Friday, Sadje.
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Same to you too dear friend
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<3
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🙏🏼♥️🙏🏼
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There’s a feel-good story, Lisa. Good friends to the rescue. We all need that, to be sure. I hope your week goes well.
-David
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David, you are so right. Thanks and I hope yours does also.
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Beautifully written, Lisa, and that feeling feels familiar even without the depression. Nostalgia is like that sometimes too. It’s so good to have a few people who care.
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Gabi, thank you for your wonderful comment <3
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Black reverie of past giving way to brightness of present blessing!
Kudos!
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Indeed! Thanks much, Sabina.
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Awesome Li! 💝💝 I think reaching out when you are lonely is always a good thing! 👏👏
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Thanks so much. I agree with you.
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Those are real friends with a good sense of timing. Lovely vignette.
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Patrick, I appreciate your comment, thanks.
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Dear Lisa,
I love a happy ending. I know that feeling of depression all too well. Glad she had friends show up at the right time. Lovely. Thank you for your epilogue as well.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle, thank you very much for your kind comment.
Shalom,
Lisa
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That’s definitely my bag – books and bookworms. Nice one, Li.
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Chris, me too! Thanks much.
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I’d be sincerely lost without my friends.
Online and in real life.
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I hear you, Dawn <3
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Bailey-splashed hot rooibos tea – I’ve got to try that. Very well-crafted story with a poignant message.
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Thank you very much. Yes, you do. It’s yummy :)
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A lively break to a moment of quiet reflection
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I love this account from true life thanks for sharing 🩷
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Thanks much, Ange.
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Winter can be very difficult for many. I love the ending, with her friends showing up. I also appreciate the sensitive last bit, encouraging those who feel this way to seek a friendly voice. :)
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Brenda, thank you so much for your thoughtful comment <3
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