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Day 7 — OctWriPoMo — Arrow

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Pierce Arrow hood ornament Gilmore Car Museum 2014

Arrow

Your jaw
went slack.  Your eyes
went wide. You gasped for air.
I hit my stride.  Morning’s regret
will wait.

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  1. februarygrace's avatar februarygrace says:
    October 7, 2017 at 11:49 am

    Poem 7… excellent images, I can see it very clearly when reading. Lovely!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      October 7, 2017 at 12:20 pm

      Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!

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  2. heyannis's avatar heyannis says:
    October 8, 2017 at 12:12 am

    I saw it, too. Clear imagery. Thank you. xoA

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