
The prompt today is betrayal. It seems to happen so much, the question must be asked if betrayal is not an immutable part of human nature. There are levels of betrayal, all painful, but some more harmful than others. I chose to free form it but split it into 2 halves.
the conscious, willing
gestalt through love,
tender compilation,
sacred stone dropped,
rippling a protective radiance,
warming satellites
and beyond.
synchronized heartbeats
from unfettered trust,
bonds woven, then fused,
peaceful comfort, resting —
*
until a shit storm of
reigning arrows of
dark self-righteousness,
viral rationalization,
purposeful blindness,
deafness, and heartlessness
rain upon their love.
now hearts a bleeding
pincushion, with a
poison chaser of
subconscious mandate
to reciprocally flagellate
relationships, like life itself, are complicated
who betrayed who?

Your introduction gave me the impulse to write something (I had written so much yesterday already, I didn’t think I’d write anything more… now… I just may!). Thanks!
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:)
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And now it’s finished :)
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will check it out!
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Absolutely amazing choice of words. I enjoyed the meter as well.
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thank you so much Roshni and glad you enjoyed it
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Whoa, brilliant!
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:) thank you!
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I immensely enjoyed the juxtaposition of the two parts and the vocabulary used to reinforce it.
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thank you very much
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You are welcome.
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Love both parts – and that last line really ties it all together!
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thank you Shuku. i appreciate your kind words
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