Trap

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Fandango’s One Word Challenge today is trap.  Today’s offering is a sedoka .

The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives.

Trap

Arms, bodies entwined

Languishing abed mornings

Lived fantasies consume us

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Drained reality

Sated husks shuffle between

Ecstasy and scorched madness

 

7 Comments Add yours

  1. Jordan says:

    Well done! Love the image too!

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  2. I enjoyed it – thanks !

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  3. Nicely penned and a very interesting take :O) x

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you. It’s funny where the mind can take a person at times.

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      1. That’s very true; it does makes life interesting :O) x

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