Oblivion

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A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme.

She sinks into oblivion
Each instance his name is spoken
It hearkens back to time of sun
When her heart had first awoken
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Then put to sleep at his cruel hand
She sinks into oblivion
Too soon ’twas winter on the land
Where now she dwells in Stygia
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Heart of midnight obsidian
No more on earthly realm does dwell
She sinks into oblivion
Assignation with reaper’s knell
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In her blue velvet he loved well
Sips tea, ricin valerian
A tender smile plays round her lips
She sinks into oblivion

word of the day challenge — oblivion

8 Comments Add yours

  1. Irene's avatar Irene says:

    Very nice refrain, it just flows through the quatrains!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you Irene! glad you enjoyed it.

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  2. Jordy's avatar Jordan says:

    Well done, great flow and weaving of the poems poignant reflection.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks Jordan :)

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  3. mizuv's avatar Paula Light says:

    Ooh haunting!

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  4. Such an interesting form. I really enjoyed the flow. 😊

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Glad you liked it ☺

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