Fandango's One Word Challenge (FOWC), poetry, triolet

FOWC — Forgive

Posted by msjadeli on

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Fandango’s FOWC is forgive. Today’s offering is in the form of a triolet.

 

Forgive

Hearts shall lighten with forgiveness

Burdens gone, shall weigh down no more

Shift to wrongdoer; divest

Hearts shall lighten with forgiveness

Lightened soul, with wings, soars fearless

Cosmic balance shifts, evens the score

Hearts shall lighten with forgiveness

Burdens gone, shall weigh down no more

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4 Comments Add yours

  1. Sadje says:
    January 4, 2019 at 7:15 pm

    How lovely !

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  2. JoAnna says:
    January 5, 2019 at 11:15 am

    Forgiveness can be really hard. This beautiful vision of the benefits helps!

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    1. msjadeli says:
      January 5, 2019 at 11:22 am

      This poem comes from my heart and from personal experience. It’s the only perspective that works for me.

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  3. JoAnna says:
    January 5, 2019 at 1:05 pm

    Reblogged this on Loving Me, Too and commented:
    Sharing this poem from Tao-Talk because I want to remember it. Forgiveness of others and also myself may not be easy, worth the letting go for these gifts.

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