Friday Fictioneers — Justice

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Mama, what’s that smell?”

Long before we reached the part of the well-known path that was lit, an odd aroma met our nostrils. We were half-running because it took longer than I thought to get the animals fed. We were headed towards the town hall of our small village to see the trial for Velma, our neighbor. Trials were always held at night. Velma was accused of witchcraft when the tea she brewed broke the baby’s fever.

Sentence was being carried out as we made the clearing. Velma was at the stake, burning under the bright floodlight.

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  1. Neil MacDonald's avatar neilmacdon says:

    Doesn’t seem quite fair, burning her for curing the baby’s fever. But I guess that’s the nature of witchcraft hysteria

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Yes. Or any kind of mass hysteria.

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  2. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    It seems unreal, yet in some respects only the people chosen as scapegoats have changed. (K)

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  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Poor lady, that’s what they did, back in the day.

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  4. draliman's avatar draliman says:

    How dare she save a baby.
    There’s nothing quite like a good midnight witch-burning for entertainment…

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  5. Oh no! :(
    Witch execution!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      It’s a template for “us” and “them” that transcends time or group :(

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      1. It is sad..but true! :(

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  6. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly says:

    They might regret it the next time there’s a sick baby in the town. Good story.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Iain, yes.

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  7. Dear MsJ,

    What a thing to fry for. Well done. I mean, good job.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Rochelle.

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  8. ceayr's avatar ceayr says:

    Brutal story, well crafted.
    Which you crafted well.
    Which craft, witchcraft.
    Burn her, burn her!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Thank you, for your compliment and the poem it inspired.

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  9. GHLearner's avatar gahlearner says:

    This turns my stomach, so many have died for these stupid reasons. Well told.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Yes they have. Thanks.

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  10. granonine's avatar granonine says:

    We still hunt witches, we just have different way of “burning” them today. We let the media do it.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Exactly, it never ends :(

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  11. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    Oh dear. Heaven forbid they put aside their fear of witches when a child is saved. And they call witches heathens…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Human ignorance, followed by evil actions, knows no bounds.

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  12. jeremyjames's avatar jeremyjames says:

    Too late to the scene! Should have started a chant…’Correlation not causation!’ LOL

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      You know I’m taking the hell express for that last comment don’t you? Dont encourage me! ;)

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      1. jeremyjames's avatar jeremyjames says:

        Understood! No more provocative commentary..

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  13. Abhijit Ray's avatar Abhijit Ray says:

    That is so terrible. Thelma cured a baby.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Ignorance with malicious intent or blind brainwashing make for evil actions.

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  14. The fear of the unknown leading to a horrible part of history. So sad but well written story.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Brenda.

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  15. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz says:

    Excellent rendering of a witch hunt, told as if it was just another days event..

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Exactly. This ties in with Reena’s Exploration Challenge this week, about “getting accustomed to darkness.”

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  16. Margaret's avatar Margaret says:

    The matter of fact tone makes this horrific event even more horrific. Well told.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Yes, the ways of the village have grown accustomed to the darkness. Thank you for seeing that.

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  17. Mags's avatar magarisa says:

    By mentioning the smell at the beginning, you emphasize how terribly real this was for people at that time. Though we don’t burn people at the stake these days, we still have our scapegoats…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you for your insightful comments, Magarisa. So true.

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      1. Mags's avatar magarisa says:

        You’re welcome.

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  18. gc1963's avatar gc1963 says:

    Oh! Terrible…

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