50 Word Thursday — Guardian

Teresa is the host of this Thursday’s 50 Word Thursday.  Teresa says:

Rules: 
**Find the muse within the photo or line provided and follow where it leads. It can be a story, anecdote, poem. Anything!
**Story must be between 50 and 250 words, in 50 word increments.
**Link back to this post with the tag 50WordThurs so that everyone can find it, or post your response in the comments below.
**HAVE FUN!


ne’er was a creature so true and so loyal.
Dav Pilkey, God Bless the Gargoyles

Since the afternoon ten-year-old Marie found him crying when Senior Sister Magdalene passed, Mercucio, the Gargoyle, loved the girl. Left on the steps of the convent as a baby, little Marie was a child whose joy made others smile. She’d made Mercucio smile that afternoon.

Mercucio watched over Marie like a guardian angel, and ne’er was a creature so true and so loyal. Father Timothy was found one morning on the stone pathway to the garden, his neck snapped. They said he accidentally fell from the bell tower. Father Timothy would never harm Marie again.

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  1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 says:

    That is a good one!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you Max. Glad you like it.

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      1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 says:

        Again Twilight Zonish with a moral and justice.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Those kinds of stories I think I like writing best.

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  2. jeremyjames's avatar jeremyjames says:

    Hard to create a ‘world’ with so few words but I think you did that here

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you Jeremy. The picture with the line included were a great setup.

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  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    A great story.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks Sadje :)

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re welcome Li.

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  4. I loved this. Loyal and true. And the hidden meaning adds so much more.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Michele.

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