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Reena’s Exploration Challenge #83 — C4

Posted by Lisa or Li on

Perspective

 

Reena is the host of Reena’s Exploration Challenge.  Reena says:
You may not see it in the same manner. And why should you? Each of us has our own unique perspective on the world and its interesting contents.
FOR THE NEW ENTRANTS
There is no restriction on the length or format of the piece.

C4

You lit my fuse with C4
Blasted by your love bomb
Reconstituted in your favorite flavor
A fizzy lifting drink
For you to sip at your leisure
Added to your human wine cellar
On a stringed cork
Pulled out for special occasions
Tossed in the bin
When empty

 

 

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  1. Reena Saxena's avatar Reena Saxena says:
    April 18, 2019 at 9:50 pm

    Wonderful imagery!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      April 18, 2019 at 10:07 pm

      Thank you, Reena. I got some bad news today and it charged me up to a point it needed to be vented. I guess it worked for the poem :)

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      1. Reena Saxena's avatar Reena Saxena says:
        April 18, 2019 at 11:25 pm

        How badly do we need constructive outlets to vent it out! It certainly did wonders to the poem.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
          April 18, 2019 at 11:52 pm

          <3

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  2. Reena Saxena's avatar Reena Saxena says:
    April 18, 2019 at 9:51 pm

    C4 by Jade Li

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  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:
    April 19, 2019 at 4:27 am

    Interesting take on the prompt.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      April 19, 2019 at 11:52 am

      Thanks, Sadje

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:
        April 19, 2019 at 12:07 pm

        You’re welcome 😉

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  4. Just Barry's avatar Just Barry says:
    April 22, 2019 at 11:26 am

    I enjoyed reading this. Lots of interesting visuals.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      April 22, 2019 at 12:30 pm

      Thank you, Barry. Glad you enjoyed it.

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  5. Indira's avatar Indira says:
    April 23, 2019 at 3:40 pm

    Nice way to vent out. Beautifully expressed.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      April 23, 2019 at 4:36 pm

      Thank you Indira, it was a healthy way for me.

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