Reena’s Exploration Challenge #87 — Traveling Day Train


Reena is the host of Reena’s Exploration Challenge.  Reena says:
Welcome to the 87th round of reflections and looking both inwards and outwards to explore!  I give you a choice between two pictures. You can choose any one, or write two separate pieces for both, and link up.

Picture courtesy – Prachika Saxena

Click clack click clack click clack

A human engine chugs down the track

Through hallways dim, with flickered light

‘Til destination is in her sight

Finds the station of daily matters

Pays the fees while epithet splatters

Gets her receipt, which ends the show

Time for the next stop, away she goes.

11 Comments Add yours

  1. map195 says:

    nice share

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  2. Sadje says:

    Human engine! Good one 👍

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks Sadje. It started out with me hearing the sound of her shoes click clacking and echoing down the hallway which made me think of a train. It’s funny how the mind works sometimes.

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      1. Sadje says:

        It is indeed. Great result!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Jim.

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  3. Reena Saxena says:

    A perfect Traveller’s Tale! But destinations do matter.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you Reena 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  4. Reena Saxena says:

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
    Travelling Day Train …. by Jade Li

    Liked by 1 person

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