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Carpe Diem #1695 Ice Cream … Troiku

Posted by Lisa or Li on


Ice Cream

The original haiku, from which the troiku will be composed, is:

snow fall in belly
adding lusciousness to feast 
vanilla ice cream

© S.D. Tiwari

snow fall in belly
crystal flakes of delicious
appetite’s season

adding lusciousness to feast
eyes, tongue, throat, belly
dominos of yum

vanilla ice cream
coned challenge of summer
as tongues race the drips

 

Chevrefeuille is the host of Carpe Diem Haiku Kai’s Ice Cream … Troiku

 

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  1. The Real Cie's avatar The Real Cie says:
    July 4, 2019 at 10:09 pm

    Dominoes of yum–love it!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      July 5, 2019 at 3:57 pm

      Thank you, Cie! Glad you enjoyed it.

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  2. gigilaeli's avatar Lael-Heart says:
    July 5, 2019 at 12:17 pm

    I NEED ice cream now :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      July 5, 2019 at 12:40 pm

      :)

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  3. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:
    July 5, 2019 at 7:00 pm

    The coned challenge is exactly right…but worth it! (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      July 5, 2019 at 7:23 pm

      :)

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  4. lynn__'s avatar lynn__ says:
    July 7, 2019 at 3:53 pm

    Love your “dominoes of yum” and how “tongues race the drips”!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      July 7, 2019 at 6:15 pm

      :) Thanks Lynn

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