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Headaches and dizziness
Effected her peace
Time for CAT:
Astrocytoma.
Death Star.
Do or Die
To battle
Stations!
Masked heroes prepare
Sterile theater to end
Sinuated Chthulu’s
Shine; brave Dr.
Ulysses lasered
All but nicked
her amygdala.
Fearless now, she fights all day long….
WhimsyGizmo (aka De) is today’s host of dVerse. De says:
Nick the page with your quill, and pen us a poem of exactly 44 words (not counting the title), but literally including some form of the word nick.
Notes:
CT, or CAT scans, are special X-ray tests that produce cross-sectional images of the body using X-rays and a computer. CT scans are also referred to as computerized axial tomography.
Astrocytomas are a type of cancer of the brain. They originate in a particular kind of glial cells, star-shaped brain cells in the cerebrum called astrocytes. This type of tumor does not usually spread outside the brain and spinal cord and it does not usually affect other organs.
There are two amygdalae per person normally, with one amygdala on each side of the brain. They are thought to be a part of the limbic system within the brain, which is responsible for emotions, survival instincts, and memory. … The amygdala in humans also plays a role in sexual activity and libido, or sex drive. It is also known as the hub of fight/flight/freeze.
Image is of a human astrocyte by Bruno Pascal.

Oh so scary to see those image… the reference to Lovecraft’s monster is perfect
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Thank you very much, Bjorn.
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Yes, I loved the Lovecraft reference as well. Very well done. And I pray, NOT autobiographical.
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Thank you, De. No it isn’t, and thanks for caring <3
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I hope this is not autobiographical Lisa. The images are frightening.
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No, Toni, not autobiographical. A colleague of my ex-husband had one years ago and was able to beat it, which was a miracle.
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The last line tugs at my heartstrings. Beautiful write.
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Beverly glad you connected with the poem. Thank you
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Very interesting and creative use of a mere 44 words. Fantasy, horror and Sci-Fi morphs into science fact. Thanks for the explication.
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Thank you, Glenn.
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Bravery personified!
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Thank you, Vivian.
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Oh my this sounds terrifying. Nicely written though and thanks for the info at the end. :)
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You’re welcome and thanks.
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Really well done!
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Thank you very much, Phillip.
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Breathless! This is wonderful.
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Thanks very much, Sascha.
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Loved this spacey piece Lisa. Kinda cosmic.,
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It was written as more of a medical horror story. Your take is more upbeat and free-flowing, so yay :)
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Brain cancer is frightening. Your images work well to convey that. (K)
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Thank you Kerfe. The guy my ex worked with was able to beat it, but any time you start cutting into the brain it’s a toss of the coin what happens after.
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There are exceptions, but mostly it runs rampant, even after surgery and chemo.
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FIRST: VERY glad to know this is not biographical. My cousin died just two weeks ago – from a brain tumor. So this hits close to home….he fought so hard but it incapacitated him and he died as a shell of the man he was. He served our country in Viet Name — a war that was impugned by many including me….yet he served and came back a different person. I was so very glad that he was provided a military honor guard at his service.
The images that indicate this insidious disease — look like something from the solar system…but are insidious in the death star attack mode.
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Lillian, please let me offer condolences on your cousin’s passing. From your description, he suffered more than anyone should ever have to suffer, with the war overseas then the war against the disease. It is amazing how much things in our universe can resemble each other but on a different scale of size.
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Short but sweet and scary. Nailed it.
If only I could write prose like that! :)
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Thank you very much. I bet you can!
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Like how you wrote that. It’s like sci-fi inner space, a mirror of outer space. Great last line.
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Thank you, D, and I appreciate your view of the poem.
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Thank you. And I mean not just the lovely wording, but ESPECIALLY the reining in of thoughts and economy of words and space !!!
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Thanks so much for your kind words.
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