dVerse — quadrille — Death Star

Headaches and dizziness
Effected her peace
Time for CAT:
Astrocytoma.
Death Star.
Do or Die
To battle
Stations!

Masked heroes prepare
Sterile theater to end
Sinuated Chthulu’s
Shine; brave Dr.
Ulysses lasered
All but nicked
her amygdala.

Fearless now, she fights all day long….

 

WhimsyGizmo (aka De) is today’s host of dVerse.  De says:
Nick the page with your quill, and pen us a poem of exactly 44 words (not counting the title), but literally including some form of the word nick.

Notes

CT, or CAT scans, are special X-ray tests that produce cross-sectional images of the body using X-rays and a computer. CT scans are also referred to as computerized axial tomography.

Astrocytomas are a type of cancer of the brain. They originate in a particular kind of glial cells, star-shaped brain cells in the cerebrum called astrocytes. This type of tumor does not usually spread outside the brain and spinal cord and it does not usually affect other organs.

There are two amygdalae per person normally, with one amygdala on each side of the brain. They are thought to be a part of the limbic system within the brain, which is responsible for emotions, survival instincts, and memory. … The amygdala in humans also plays a role in sexual activity and libido, or sex drive.  It is also known as the hub of fight/flight/freeze.

Image is of a human astrocyte by Bruno Pascal.

31 Comments

  1. Oh so scary to see those image… the reference to Lovecraft’s monster is perfect

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much, Bjorn.

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  2. whimsygizmo's avatar whimsygizmo says:

    Yes, I loved the Lovecraft reference as well. Very well done. And I pray, NOT autobiographical.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, De. No it isn’t, and thanks for caring <3

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  3. kanzensakura's avatar kanzensakura says:

    I hope this is not autobiographical Lisa. The images are frightening.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      No, Toni, not autobiographical. A colleague of my ex-husband had one years ago and was able to beat it, which was a miracle.

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  4. Beverly Crawford's avatar Beverly Crawford says:

    The last line tugs at my heartstrings. Beautiful write.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Beverly glad you connected with the poem. Thank you

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  5. Glenn A. Buttkus's avatar Glenn A. Buttkus says:

    Very interesting and creative use of a mere 44 words. Fantasy, horror and Sci-Fi morphs into science fact. Thanks for the explication.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Glenn.

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  6. Vivian Zems's avatar Vivian Zems says:

    Bravery personified!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Vivian.

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  7. Oh my this sounds terrifying. Nicely written though and thanks for the info at the end. :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      You’re welcome and thanks.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much, Phillip.

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  8. Breathless! This is wonderful.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks very much, Sascha.

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  9. Rob Kistner's avatar Rob Kistner says:

    Loved this spacey piece Lisa. Kinda cosmic.,

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      It was written as more of a medical horror story. Your take is more upbeat and free-flowing, so yay :)

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  10. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Brain cancer is frightening. Your images work well to convey that. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you Kerfe. The guy my ex worked with was able to beat it, but any time you start cutting into the brain it’s a toss of the coin what happens after.

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      1. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

        There are exceptions, but mostly it runs rampant, even after surgery and chemo.

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  11. lillian's avatar lillian says:

    FIRST: VERY glad to know this is not biographical. My cousin died just two weeks ago – from a brain tumor. So this hits close to home….he fought so hard but it incapacitated him and he died as a shell of the man he was. He served our country in Viet Name — a war that was impugned by many including me….yet he served and came back a different person. I was so very glad that he was provided a military honor guard at his service.
    The images that indicate this insidious disease — look like something from the solar system…but are insidious in the death star attack mode.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Lillian, please let me offer condolences on your cousin’s passing. From your description, he suffered more than anyone should ever have to suffer, with the war overseas then the war against the disease. It is amazing how much things in our universe can resemble each other but on a different scale of size.

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  12. selizabryangmailcom's avatar selizabryangmailcom says:

    Short but sweet and scary. Nailed it.
    If only I could write prose like that! :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much. I bet you can!

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  13. Like how you wrote that. It’s like sci-fi inner space, a mirror of outer space. Great last line.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, D, and I appreciate your view of the poem.

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  14. selizabryangmailcom's avatar selizabryangmailcom says:

    Thank you. And I mean not just the lovely wording, but ESPECIALLY the reining in of thoughts and economy of words and space !!!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks so much for your kind words.

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