OctPoWriMo2019 Day 16 — Fading Out

Image result for fading out painting

 

ticking on
ticking out
out as gone
out of reach
reach before
reach now
now is all
now wants you
you are here
you must act
act towards
act with love
love is all
love to draw
draw it in
draw while time
time goes
time takes
takes past
takes future
future ahead
future unsure
unsure outcomes
unsure links
links to love
links to feeling
feeling free
feeling chained
chained to past
chained to tomorrow
tomorrow too far
tomorrow not now
now again
now enjoy
enjoy life
enjoy give
give receive
give again
again and again
again liberates
liberates guilt
liberates past
past anchors
past regrets
regrets drain
regrets must fade
fade away
fade to make way
way
away

Morgan Dragonwillow is the host of OctPoWriMo.  Morgan says:
Poetry Prompts:
Free write about how you feel about time. Do you have clocks in every room? Do you find your time valuable or do you give it away to everyone else but yourself?
Word Prompts:
Measure
running out
overwhelm
slowly
fast
wasting
giving away
me time
Suggested Poetry Type: Let’s go for the Blitz for this poem, it has that, “time is running out” feel.

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18 Comments Add yours

  1. sgeoil says:

    Great blitz! I needed to take a breath at the end, well done!

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      1. sgeoil says:

        You are welcome!

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  2. memadtwo says:

    Like the ticking of a clock. (K)

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    1. msjadeli says:

      True! Didn’t think of it that way but yes 🙂

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  3. the real cie says:

    A real nice flow to this one.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Punam 🙂

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      1. You are welcome! 🙂

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  4. Sadje says:

    Wonderful word play.

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  5. What a ride! I enjoyed it!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      🙂 Thank you.

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      1. You’re welcome!

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  6. ghostmmnc says:

    I really like how this turned out. I do love the blitz form of poetry. 🙂

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Barbara. Blitz is as fun to write as to read.

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