New Form–Lewis Carroll Square — Fall Court

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Tree frogs, autumn’s songs
Frogs courting cool hope
Autumn’s cool courting frogs
Songs hope frogs court

Paul at Paul’s Poetry Playground shared a new form and it looked like a fun challenge, a word-based sudoku even, so much I decided to give it a try.

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  1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 says:

    Love that illustration at the top…I’m a frog fan…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) I love frogs!

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      1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 says:

        My wife loves turtles and of all things…giraffes…she will collect anything with either.

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  2. Paul Szlosek's avatar Paul Szlosek says:

    Well done! I love both your square poem and the illustration you chose to accompany it.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Paul :)

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  3. sgeoil's avatar sgeoil says:

    I loved this! It has a storybook feel! Interesting form, seems quite challenging…I love a good challenge.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      If you use a grid it is easier to experiment and find words that work together, per Paul’s suggestion. Glad you liked it :)

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      1. sgeoil's avatar sgeoil says:

        I really did like it. I tried it out and found the grid to be helpful!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you for sharing!

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