Pink blanket pulled up
Behind frozen bones of trees —
Sparrow’s silhouette
Snuggling in my warm bed
Wakened, with Spring, by his song
Frank J. Tassone is the host of Haikai Challenge. Frank says:
This week, write the haikai poem of your choice (haiku, senryu, haibun, tanka, haiga, renga, etc.) that states or alludes to first sparrows twittering (hatsusuzume).
image: “Pink Sparrow Silhouette” by D. Hackett
http://paperkutzs.com/2020/01/27/haiku-challenge-123-first-sparrow/
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Well done, with a nice turn.
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Thank you, Ken.
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Excellent!
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Thanks, Punam.
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You are welcome.
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Amazing !!!
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Thank you.
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A beautiful poem Li. Spring is in the air.
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Thank you, Sadje. I wish it was closer here…
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It’s on its way.
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #1 (1/28/20): Jade Li’s latest #tanka for my current #haikai challenge!
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