
The
fork is raised,
red velvet cake poised–
a willing sacrifice to
tastebuds’ salivary crave
that will be content
with nothing
less.
Today’s offering is in the Joseph’s Star poetic form.
Sarah is today’s host of dVerse.Β Sarah says:
Tonight, I want you to bring a little red into your poem.
Yummy π
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Yummy.
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Uh huh π
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Sounds perfect β¦ but maybe a bit to heavy in the end.
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Oh, that’s a delicious little form – I love the way the shape echoes the cake – or the mouth opening to eat it!
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Wow, you’re right! Thanks for the perceptive comment.
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I LOVE red velvet cake!!
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I don’t like red velvet cake that much but have savored your words. π
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π Glad you enjoyed them.
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Yum! Yes, seems our cravings are all red!!
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I had “cave” there first and changed it to “crave” Red does get the blood moving for sure.
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…yes it does! Very nice!
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You’ve caught the attention of my sweet tooth.
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Virtual cake is calorie-free. Enjoy!
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I never met a red velvet cake I didn’t like. Yours looks like it has whipped cream frosting–yum.
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I went heavy yesterday so I went light today. Calorie-free even. ::pushes piece of cake through screen:: Enjoy!
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De-LISH! Very evocative and yummy.
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Glad you enjoyed. There’s still some left if you want more π
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I like how that cake is a sacrifice.
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willing at that!
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It looks delicious – The fork is raised ready to go…
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STOP!! I’ve already put 7lbs on from self-isolating !!!!
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Don’t worry, Vivian, virtual cake is calorie-free! ::pushes piece of cake through screen to you:: Enjoy!
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Yum!
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Mmmm…delicious! π
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So glad you think it is tasty, Christine π
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I want that cake so freaking bad!!! π
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:::pushing piece through the screen to you::: Enjoy!
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I cant believe I have lived my whole life and never tasted it.
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To be honest, it tastes like chocolate cake to me. At the same time when I read the prompt it was the first thing I thought of! Not that chocolate cake is bad. It’s actually very good π
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Mouth-watering. Now a big pool of saliva on my keyboard.
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LOL, glad you enjoyed the cake π
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I agree with Sarah about the form, Lisa. I’ve never eaten red velvet cake and, although diabetes dictates my diet, I’d love a bite!
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:::pushing cake through screen to you::: Enjoy!
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Thank you, Lisa! Yum!
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oooh. this is delicious!
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Thank you!
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My younger daughter is particularly fond of this treat. (K)
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Ah, the shape! right down to the last bite.
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Uh huh!
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Now you have me drooling!
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π ::pushing cake through screen:: Calorie-free!
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Thank you for your thoughtful gesture. Could do with some calorie-free food these days!!
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You’re very welcome β€
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Big smile
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Maybe you should have left crave as cave, since this much cake is something to beware of
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It’s a cupcake, and I’ve given most of it away. Virtual cake is calorie-free!
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Wonderful response!
Red Velvet cake never seems chocolate enough for me, but I’d still eat it, and this piece looks delicious!
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You’re in luck, there’s a bit left. ::pushing piece through screen:: Enjoy!
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Now that’s a fun use of the prompt redπ
Pat
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apple pie is my sacrifice to the taste buds. really enjoyed this
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lol That’s a good way of putting it. Glad you enjoyed it, thanks!
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