Muse and Angel Triolet
When wings of muse and angel weave
with heaven’s breeze a spirit chimes
rose-scented wafts, immersed relief
When wings of muse and angel weave
They somersault and skirt the trees
They flutter soft with dreams and rhymes
When wings of muse and angel weave
with heaven’s breeze a spirit chimes
Paul at Paul’s Poetry Playground shared several triolet form poems and gave some good tips on writing them.
Also sharing this on earthweal‘s Open Link Weekend.
Bravo for such a wonderful job, you wrote a truly lovely triolet!😊
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Thank you, Paul, and thank you for the inspiration 🙂
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Wonderful poem! It has gorgeous imagery. ❤
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Thank you, Lucy 🙂
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💖💖💖
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🙂 ❤
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Ah, this is such a lovely poem. Very delicate expression.
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Thank you, Sadje.
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You’re welcome Li
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Beautifully written Lisa
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Thanks Max
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Fun 🌈 like a rainbow weaving colors 🙂
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Thank you very much, Jules 🙂
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“With heaven’s breeze a spirit chimes.” I love it.
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Thanks!
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How beautiful.
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Thank you, Suzanne.
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How beautiful.
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A stunning triolet, Lisa! I love the movement of the muse and angel wings, and the echoing of the spirit chiming in the repeated line.
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So glad you liked it, Kim. When I said last week that you inspired the triolet I wrote, this is the one I was talking about.
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🤓💖
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A lovely triolet 👍👍
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Thank you, Roshni 🙂
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