Muse and Angel Triolet

artwork by Michelle Lake

 

Muse and Angel Triolet

When wings of muse and angel weave
with heaven’s breeze a spirit chimes
rose-scented wafts, immersed relief
When wings of muse and angel weave
They somersault and skirt the trees
They flutter soft with dreams and rhymes
When wings of muse and angel weave
with heaven’s breeze a spirit chimes

 

 

 

Paul at Paul’s Poetry Playground shared several triolet form poems and gave some good tips on writing them.

Also sharing this on earthweal‘s Open Link Weekend.

23 Comments Add yours

  1. Paul Szlosek says:

    Bravo for such a wonderful job, you wrote a truly lovely triolet!😊

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Paul, and thank you for the inspiration πŸ™‚

      Like

  2. Lucy says:

    Wonderful poem! It has gorgeous imagery. ❀

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Lucy πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      πŸ™‚ ❀

      Like

  3. Sadje says:

    Ah, this is such a lovely poem. Very delicate expression.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sadje.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome Li

        Liked by 1 person

  4. badfinger20 (Max) says:

    Beautifully written Lisa

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Jules says:

    Fun 🌈 like a rainbow weaving colors πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much, Jules πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Sherry Marr says:

    “With heaven’s breeze a spirit chimes.” I love it.

    Liked by 2 people

  7. Suzanne says:

    How beautiful.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Suzanne.

      Liked by 1 person

  8. Suzanne says:

    How beautiful.

    Liked by 2 people

  9. kim881 says:

    A stunning triolet, Lisa! I love the movement of the muse and angel wings, and the echoing of the spirit chiming in the repeated line.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. msjadeli says:

      So glad you liked it, Kim. When I said last week that you inspired the triolet I wrote, this is the one I was talking about.

      Liked by 2 people

      1. kim881 says:

        πŸ€“πŸ’–

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  10. Roshni says:

    A lovely triolet πŸ‘πŸ‘

    Liked by 2 people

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Roshni πŸ™‚

      Liked by 2 people

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