The Sunday Muse 148 — Distracted

Light slides forever
down your silky thigh, launchpad
for erotic flight.
Warm milk calls pussy away
as angled skin joins in play.

 

 

This may be my first erotic tanka!  Great photo to write to for a cold February afternoon.

Shay is today’s host of The Sunday Muse.

25 Comments Add yours

  1. coalblack says:

    Nice!

    –Fireblossom

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you 🙂

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  2. Good writing, Lisa. You nailed the prompt, for sure! Nicely crafted!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Glad you enjoyed the poem, Susan, thank you 🙂

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      1. You’re very welcome. Thank you for sharing!

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  3. Helen Dehner says:

    Ooooooooh, this is delicious!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      🙂 Thanks, Helen.

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  4. Gillena Cox says:

    Wow very sensuous Jade. Happy Sunday. Thanks for dropping by my blog today

    Much💗love

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Gillena!

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  5. Carrie V. H. says:

    This is the most delicious tanka I have ever read! Evocative and wonderful writing Lisa!!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Carrie, thank you 🙂

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  6. qbit says:

    The world needs more erotic Tankas like these!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much 🙂

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  7. Jim says:

    Nice on the new attempt. Yes, I think it stayed erotic, I liked the angled thigh. I hope you will forgive me today, I was practicing writing, bad job though, Gothic Fiction Poetry.
    ..

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Jim, I liked your Gothic Fiction Poetry offering this week.

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  8. memadtwo says:

    Erotic is what the promot called for…(k)

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  9. Beverly Crawford says:

    Erotic indeed. Nice work!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Beverly!

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  10. You caught the scene and the mood!

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  11. Dave says:

    Nicely written… as I discovered after finally discovering there was something on the page besides the photo, LOL.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      LOL Dave. I am still agonizing over whether the light should have slid down her thigh or crept up 😉 Here I felt the light was more fluid and so obeyed the laws of gravity.

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