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  1. coalblack says:

    Nice!

    –Fireblossom

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you 🙂

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  2. Good writing, Lisa. You nailed the prompt, for sure! Nicely crafted!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Glad you enjoyed the poem, Susan, thank you 🙂

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      1. You’re very welcome. Thank you for sharing!

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  3. Helen Dehner says:

    Ooooooooh, this is delicious!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      🙂 Thanks, Helen.

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  4. Gillena Cox says:

    Wow very sensuous Jade. Happy Sunday. Thanks for dropping by my blog today

    Much💗love

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Gillena!

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  5. Carrie V. H. says:

    This is the most delicious tanka I have ever read! Evocative and wonderful writing Lisa!!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Carrie, thank you 🙂

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  6. qbit says:

    The world needs more erotic Tankas like these!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much 🙂

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  7. Jim says:

    Nice on the new attempt. Yes, I think it stayed erotic, I liked the angled thigh. I hope you will forgive me today, I was practicing writing, bad job though, Gothic Fiction Poetry.
    ..

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Jim, I liked your Gothic Fiction Poetry offering this week.

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  8. memadtwo says:

    Erotic is what the promot called for…(k)

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  9. Beverly Crawford says:

    Erotic indeed. Nice work!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Beverly!

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  10. You caught the scene and the mood!

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  11. Dave says:

    Nicely written… as I discovered after finally discovering there was something on the page besides the photo, LOL.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      LOL Dave. I am still agonizing over whether the light should have slid down her thigh or crept up 😉 Here I felt the light was more fluid and so obeyed the laws of gravity.

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