dVerse Quadrille Monday 136 – Early Morning Transport

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Some quiet clockwork mornings
air crunches, birds still slumber;
cats furry donuts in fleece beds
when anachronistic stage is set;
triggers from percolator poems
transport with each sip, to when
lips lingered over lips together,
steam wisps and easy smiles
cozy-niched into our forever.

 

image:  “Morning Coffee,” by Khalid Saqr

Linda is today’s host for dVerse’. Linda says:
Hello Everyone and Welcome to Quadrille Monday!
It’s that time again for dVerse’s own creation- the Quadrille. For those of you new to dVerse, the quadrille is a 44 word poem exactly, excluding the title. The word today is Linger or any form thereof, or even one you create containing the word.

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66 Comments Add yours

  1. Lisa – I love ‘cats furry donuts.’ Such a delightful image. And the music is stellar.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      🙂 Thank you, Linda!

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  2. Dale says:

    I, too, loved the ‘cats furry donuts’ (I had to read it twice before I said to myself…. ahhhh)! 😉

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Dale. That’s what they look like in their fleece beds when they sleep.

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      1. Dale says:

        You’re absolutely right.

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    2. FURRY DONUTS 😻

      Love!

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  3. Colours are exceptional

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  4. lillian says:

    percolator poems, steam wisps, and easy smiles. Somehow this poem makes me feel warm nurtured. Smiling I am.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      ❤ Good to hear it, Lill. Thank you.

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  5. Gillena Cox says:

    Coffee memories lingering kisses. A lovely brew

    Thanks for dropping by to read mine

    Much💖love

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Gillena, thank you very much and you are welcome. Happy Monday ❤

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  6. Anonymous says:

    A perfect time for some Chet Baker (what a life he had). Your free verse is smooth, calming, fulfilling. This shows yet another side to you.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, “Someone,” for the feedback.

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  7. Dora says:

    Lisa,
    “Triggers from percolator poem”: what a phrase to set the stage! Lovely cozy.
    pax,
    dora

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Dora so glad the poem pleases you. Thank you.

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      1. Dora says:

        You’re welcome. 🙂💞

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  8. Beverly Crawford says:

    The lovely minutia of a cozy morning, as if tied with a tidy bow!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Beverly!

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  9. merrildsmith says:

    This is a wonderful poem, Lisa, full of wonderful words/image. So evocative–we look back on such memories, and it’s bittersweet. The music is a perfect soundtrack!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Merril, thank you. I just bought a 3-cd box set of Chet Baker music and love how he plays. Thank you for reading and your lovely feedback.

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      1. merrildsmith says:

        You’re very welcome, Lisa. I really did enjoy it.

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  10. The cosiest morning ever! Love those donut cats.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sarah ❤ I'm kind of partial to them myself.

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  11. RedCat says:

    This is so evocative and romantic. And you gave me a new way to describe my sleeping cats. Fur donuts is very apt! 🙂

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Helene 🙂

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  12. Ali Grimshaw says:

    I agree with others,
    “cats furry donuts in fleece beds” is a delightful image.
    I also like the happy ending,
    “steam wisps and easy smiles
    cozy-niched into our forever.”
    A fun read.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Ali, thank you very much 🙂

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  13. calmkate says:

    a snug sense of very companionable simple domesticity!

    My favourite line is “triggers from percolator poems” and that slow jazz number … hmm! Won me 🙂

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Many thanks, Kate 🙂

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  14. rothpoetry says:

    Nicely done Lisa!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Dwight 🙂

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  15. Grace says:

    I also love: cats furry donuts in fleece beds. This is so cozy, smiles.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      🙂 Thanks, Grace!

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  16. Nice! And that jazz music is awesome – so relaxing! Would make for a great “Sunday Six” opening! 🙂

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Christian. Go for it with the song if you want to 🙂

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  17. Lovey poem with such beautiful imagery.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Arcadia, thank you very much.

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  18. lynn__ says:

    A perfectly delightful way to begin the day with curled cats, cups of coffee, and lingering lips ❤

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Indeed 🙂 Thank you, Lynn.

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  19. Wow! I love all the images and the easy flow in this. “Percolater poems” is a phrase I will remember! 😍

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Tricia, so happy you enjoyed the poem, thanks 🙂

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  20. Sadje says:

    Lovely poem and imagery Li.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you and glad you enjoyed it 🙂

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      1. Sadje says:

        I did and it’s a pleasure

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  21. Ingrid says:

    I love this, Lisa, from start to finish! The opening line is killer, and the ‘furry donuts’ made me smile 🙂 Glad you percolated this.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Ingrid thanks much and glad you enjoyed it.

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  22. a compact poem packed with imagery and that lovely ending – I lingered over this several times

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you for your feedback and glad you enjoyed it, Laura.

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  23. memadtwo says:

    Coffee can definitely percolate the mind, and the not-quite-awakeness state stirs it into reverie. Also I love that painting. (K)

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you for your lovely comment, K.

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  24. Xan says:

    Every line of this is a perfect image in so few words (including a few invented ones, which I love!)

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Alexandra, glad to have pleased you with the word play. So fun to invent them.

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  25. Oh wow! What’s not to love! Still smiling… aftereffects of your verse, Li. 😊❤️

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Punam, thanks for reading and happy that the verse made you smile ❤

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      1. You are so welcome. 🙂

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  26. writingwhatnots says:

    A delicious start to the day. ‘cats furry donuts’- , what a great image. Love this.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Marion, thank you!

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  27. Such a warm poem – loved it!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Phillip 🙂

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  28. What a wonderful image of mornings. I especially liked Percolator Poems

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Bjorn, thank you, so happy you enjoyed the poem.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Awesome, Christian! Thank you for the nod. Will be “over” to listen to this week’s Sunday Six in a bit.

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