#TSM 209 — Limbo, or Black Days


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Akilter, lying down — even
as you see me upright –
a blank in kelp bed, fathoms
below, asleep, await.
My fate unknown as yet.

Will it be angel’s lift
that buoys to sunrise?
Or fey stones, that weigh
and sink beleaguered,
deflated organs of light?

My sight occluded,
my guesses gone;
laced, blind, mind-
body tethered husk,
I dwell in ever-dusk.

Carrie is the host of The Sunday Muse.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Cindy <3

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  1. Shawna's avatar Shawna says:

    “I dwell in ever-dusk”

    How beautiful.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Shawna.

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  2. Carol anne's avatar Carol anne says:

    very nice <3 <3

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Carol Anne.

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  3. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    Really cool Lisa

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Max :)

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  4. Jim's avatar Jim says:

    Living in dusk is no joy
    morning never comes
    Nor does night for me
    to dream
    I like your write, like out heroin, there isn’t an end? To be continued? :)
    ..

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Jim. I’m “out of guesses…”

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  5. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Excellent poem Li. Very evocative

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Dear Sadje.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re welcome

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  6. ‘I dwell in ever dusk’ – beautiful line, in a beautiful poem, full of wonderful expression, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Marion, thank you.

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  7. Carrie V. H.'s avatar Carrie V. H. says:

    I love the questions in this and the thoughts it stirs like the wind itself. So glad you are here Lisa! We have missed you! (Sorry it took me so long to get here. It was a busy weekend.) I hope you had a lovely Mother’s Day!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Carrie, thanks so much for your thoughtful comment and ongoing support.

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  8. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    I think we are all passing in and out of that place these days…(k)

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  9. hdwoonie23's avatar Helen says:

    Dark and gorgeous.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      <3 Thanks, Helen.

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