#TSM 210 — American Sentence

I’m frayed and twisted but still strong —
and ready for the next adventure.

This short and sweet poem is called an American Sentence, invented by Allen Ginsberg.

Carrie is the host of The Sunday Muse.

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  1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    That is to the point!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      My brain went flatline so I kept it brief. Thanks, Max :)

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  2. Staying strong, yes!

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  3. I’ve been reading the Beatniks lately..starting out with Kerouac. Ginsberg gets me nuts. Your line really fits in so well with that photo

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      We take those times for granted, as if they will always be cached in our memories, but there will come a day when their touch will be lost and they will be dry words in old unopened books (or forgotten kindle files.) Thanks, Larry.

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  4. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    Nice one. Happy Sunday

    Much 💛love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Gillena!

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  5. wyndolynne's avatar wyndolynne says:

    Love this! A good form for direct poems.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Wyndolynne. I agree, and not too many rules either (afaik!)

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  6. this is a great one!! 💖

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Thank you!

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  7. hdwoonie23's avatar Helen says:

    OH YES you are ~~ she is! Love this form ….

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  8. Carrie V. H.'s avatar Carrie V. H. says:

    Your American Sentence is as strong as the subject it displays and the poet who wrote it! A wonderful write Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      <3 Thank You, Carrie

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  9. Rall's avatar Rall says:

    Well done !

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you :)

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  10. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    An attitude we all could use. (K)

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  11. The beauty of language is what the bits and bytes contain and convey

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      You conveyed a beautiful comment here. Thank you.

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  12. Stacy MS's avatar Stacy MS says:

    i like it…short and to the point.
    i also am a big fan of Allen Ginsberg

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Stacy, and glad you are a fan.

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  13. Pradeep's avatar Pradeep says:

    I didn’t know about American sentence till now.
    Thanks for the post of yours. I learnt something new today.
    (My latest post: Online games and the idea of beauty)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Pradeep.

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  14. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa says:

    This is a well crafted American Sentence. It stands strong.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Truedessa, thank you. One of the few I’ve ever written but it wrote itself.

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  15. selizabryangmailcom's avatar selizabryangmailcom says:

    I’m totally with Pradeep. I don’t know that 70% of the things you talk about exist until I read about them here, lol. And the sentence rings so true. Who among us are not frayed and twisted? Not many. But even more so, less are ready to continue the adventure.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Well said, Stacey. The will to continue is always the question for me, be it a path, an idea, a choice, as there are so many others to choose from.

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