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POPO2022 Day 26 — hands suspending moon

Posted by Lisa or Li on

card 26 hands suspending moon resized

I am your jailor
you’re my satellite, spinning,
suspended in place

I am your jailor
key forgotten in drawer
crime of love’s sentence

satellite spinning
a puppy dog prisoner
begging for a glance

suspended in place
my charms jangle your madness
my toy; your torment

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  1. Barbara S's avatar Barbara S says:
    October 26, 2022 at 9:03 am

    oh wow, Ms, I wish I had more time right now to sit back and savour this. Thank you! :-)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      October 26, 2022 at 11:00 am

      So glad you enjoyed this one, Barbara. Thank you.

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  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:
    October 26, 2022 at 10:17 am

    Beautiful.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      October 26, 2022 at 11:01 am

      Thank you. I enjoyed writing this one very much.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:
        October 26, 2022 at 11:09 am

        You’re welcome my friend

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  3. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:
    October 26, 2022 at 9:01 pm

    Another fabulous card, and you ominous words match it perfectly. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      October 27, 2022 at 4:57 pm

      Thank you, Kerfe! Much appreciated.

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  4. Jules's avatar Jules says:
    October 27, 2022 at 6:26 pm

    Nicely done!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      October 27, 2022 at 6:29 pm

      Thank you, Jules :)

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  5. Cindy Georgakas's avatar Cindy Georgakas says:
    October 28, 2022 at 2:04 pm

    fabulous Lisa! ❣️

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      October 28, 2022 at 2:24 pm

      <3

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  6. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:
    October 29, 2022 at 9:56 pm

    Good job Lisa

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      October 30, 2022 at 11:32 am

      Thank you, Max :)

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