Warm colors your smile
under blue twinkles.
Summer-dreamed lane,
shrubs in hula leaf skirts
beneath green canopy;
hands braille the way.
We walk fragrant zones,
from humus to spruce;
inhale transcendent
scent of rose, carried
soft as bunny fur, along
this, our living dream.
top image: “Roses along the path.” by geopsych
I am today’s host of dVerse’ Quadrille Monday. I say:
Pen us a poem of precisely 44 words (not counting the title), including some form of the word warm.
Tao Talk 
This sounds so much like a beautiful summer… love it and long for it.
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I do too.
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This is such a peaceful quadrille, Lisa. I especially enjoyed the image of ‘shrubs in hula leaf skirts’ and the phrase ‘hands braille the way’.
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Kim, I’m glad you found it peaceful and enjoyed the images, thank you.
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You’re more than welcome, Lisa. ;)
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on a cold and foggy day like today i dream of days like this. thanks, you have warmed me up
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So happy you feel warmer after reading it, thanks, Rog.
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👍
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This has a calm and relaxing vibe.
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Happy you think so, thank you.
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Definitely enjoyed those ‘shrubs in hula leak skirts’ and all the other playful language that engages the senses and makes me smile! 😊
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Tricia, thank you very much <3
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💓
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When the seasons change and this dream becomes a reality it is a most wonderful experience. Loved your lines…
Shrubs in hula leaf skirts…
and
Brailling our way through the forest.
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Dwight, thank you very much, glad you enjoyed the lines <3
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You are welcome, Lisa!
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Snowing outside at the moment. Thanks for the beautiful distraction.
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Glad it helped take off the chill, Ron.
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A clever appeal to the senses.
much💜love
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Thanks much, Gillena <3
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Interesting use of braille, considering that some things may be beyond the range of just anyone’s vision here
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Thank you :)
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You had me with the first two lines….they are WONDERFUL as is the entire poem :)
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Thank you very much, Lillian. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Such a welcoming vision. (K)
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It’s what I imagine heaven being like. Thank you, K.
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I hope we all find it some day.
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scent of rose, carried
soft as bunny fur, along
this, our living dream.
How beautiful it is to experience such warmth in nature’s paradise. Wonderful write Lisa, great word craft!
Hank
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Hank, thank you very much. I hope you got my comment on your poem.
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It will be a long time before I see blooms here. Winter has not yet arrived yet everything is dark and brown. Thank you for the uplifting warmth of words and images.
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It’s like that here too, Truedessa. I escape into the fantasy realm and walk there. I hope you got my comment on your poem. Blogspot seems to be having technical difficulties?
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This is so dreamy Lisa ☺️
shrubs in hula leaf skirts
beneath green canopy;
hands braille the way.
Gorgeous!
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Thank you, Christine! <3
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Beautiful poem.
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Thank you, Sadje :)
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My pleasure
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It’s a lush description and one that warms me right up.💜
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Awesome, K <3
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I love how full of Nature your poems are. I am surrounded by concrete 😔
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Tanmay, so sorry to hear you are surrounded by concrete :( Hoping you can get out to some nature soon.
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such a warm and fragrant retrospective Lisa – these lines really stood out
“scent of rose, carried
soft as bunny fur, “
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Laura, thank you <3
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Lovely photo. You and I were thinking along the same lines.
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Thanks, Jane. Warm and nature walking together.
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This was warmth from beginning to end :)
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Thanks Dale <3
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🧡
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feeling the warmth here :)
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With good reason :)
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Lovely words.
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Thank you, Arcadia!
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What a tranquil Quadrille Lisa. Beautiful.
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Thank you very much.
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Such a beautiful quadrille you have crafted, Li! Wonderful imagery. ❤️
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Thanks much, Punam!
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Very pretty Lisa…it sounds like a warm spring day.
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Thank you, Max :)
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Loved this from the first line, Lisa!
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:) Thank you, Sara!
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The image fits so well with the words. I also definitely mentally transported myself onto that path. I can’t wait till spring. 😊
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Thank you and so glad it took you to that place :)
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