TSM 244 — “Tuesday Afternoon,” by The Moody Blues (found poem)

to see matter
clouds call
trees draw
find gentle voices, sigh;
myself, reflection
kind to leave
through fairy-land

come with me
begin to see
it does matter
clouds call
trees draw near
find out why
hear it all

Original lyrics:
Tuesday afternoon.
I’m just beginning to see,
Now I’m on my way.
It doesn’t matter to me,
Chasing the clouds away.
Something calls to me.
The trees are drawing me near,
I’ve got to find out why.
Those gentle voices I hear
Explain it all with a sigh.
I’m looking at myself, reflections of my mind.
It’s just the kind of day to leave myself behind.
So gently swaying through the fairy-land of love,
If you could just come with me and see the beauty of
Tuesday afternoon.
Tuesday afternoon.
Tuesday afternoon.
I’m just beginning to see,
Now I’m on my way.
It doesn’t matter to me,
Chasing the clouds away.
Something calls to me.
The trees are drawing me near,
I’ve got to find out why.
Those gentle voices I hear
Explain it all with a sigh.

When I saw this image I thought of The Moody Blues’ song, “Tuesday Afternoon.”  I took the lyrics and found a poem (beyond the poetry of the original lyrics written by Justin Hayward.)

 

Carrie is the host of The Sunday Muse.

34 Comments Add yours

  1. mizuv's avatar Paula Light says:

    Beautiful song and image 💙

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Paula! They seem to go together well.

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  2. Elizabeth's avatar Elizabeth says:

    I love found poetry! You did such a great job! I prefers yours to the original!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks so much, Elizabeth!

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  3. Carrie V. H.'s avatar Carrie V. H. says:

    A wonderful matching of song, words and the image Lisa! I so enjoyed this! Always glad to see you at the Muse my friend!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Glad you enjoyed the match-up. Thank you for your always friendly welcome, Carrie.

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  4. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Clouds call.. perhaps that’s why they have been so plentiful lately! A great way to make a new poem. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      May be, K. Thanks :)

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      1. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

        And now of course I wonder where my Moody Blues CD is.

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  5. Wow, it’s really remarkable how you “find poems”, Lisa. I love “Tuesday Afternoon” by the Moody Blues. That entire album, “Days of Future Passed”, is a true masterpiece!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Christian. As soon as I saw that pic, I thought of that song, and then the idea to try to do a found poem with the lyrics. I like the way it turned out. Yes that album is great.

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      1. It’s just mind-boggling to me how you do this!

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          <3 You are a prince for saying so.

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          1. Jeez, you make me blush! :-)

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  6. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Great job Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sadje.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        Most welcome

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  7. CARAMELODY's avatar CARAMELODY says:

    Haven’t heard “Tuesday Afternoon” for ages – thanks for the reminder and what a beautiful poem.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Melody, thank you and happy to bring it back to you.

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  8. wyndolynne's avatar wyndolynne says:

    Love this! A gentle poem echoing the song.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Wyndolynne <3

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  9. randydafoe's avatar randydafoe says:

    So great that you keep the words and messages alive.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Randy, thank you, my pleasure to introduce others to old gold.

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  10. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    Beautifully done and such a great song <3

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, AJ, yes it is a beauty of a song.

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  11. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa says:

    A creative take on the prompt. Found poems are always interesting. When I looked at the photo I heard “Into the Mystic” by Van Morrison.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Trudessa, I challenge you to write a found poem in “Into the Mystic”s lyrics! :)

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  12. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    What a cool (and successful) idea!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Dale :)

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      1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

        My pleasure.

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  13. Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz says:

    Great found poem, Lisa! I love the sparse nature of it, it’s a lovely response to the image :-)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sunra!

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  14. Excellent rewrite of those wonderful lyrics.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Sara!

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