Tanka Tuesday 312 — Ekphrastic Tanka

Claude Monet, “The Artist’s Garden at Giverny”

Red blossoms dangle,
pink lipstick forget-me-nots
line memory lane;
taste of our kisses linger,
perfumed eternal summer.

Tanka form

Colleen Chesebro is the host of Tanka Tuesday.Β  Colleen says:
πŸ’ This week, using the painting as your inspiration, please write either a syllabic poetry form or a freestyle poem, including a syllabic form (both on the same post). πŸ’

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40 Comments Add yours

  1. Paula Light says:

    Such beautiful imagery, Lisa!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Paula ❀

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  2. Sadje says:

    So beautiful Li.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome

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  3. memadtwo says:

    I can see how this painting would evoke memories of love…(K)

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    1. msjadeli says:

      The perfect place for love and memories of it is in the garden ❀

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  4. balroop2013 says:

    Lovely, colorful memories! A perfect tanka.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you! ❀

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  5. rothpoetry says:

    I like the comparison of flowers and kisses!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Dwight πŸ™‚

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      1. rothpoetry says:

        You are welcome!

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  6. Badfinger (Max) says:

    Nice Lisa

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    1. msjadeli says:

      πŸ™‚ Thank you.

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  7. kittysverses says:

    “pink lipstick forget-me-nots” Beautiful, Li. πŸ™‚

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Kitty πŸ™‚

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much, Roberta πŸ™‚

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  8. Perfumed eternal summer – lovely! ❀️

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Gwen πŸ™‚

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  9. merrildsmith says:

    You do this form so well–art and nature evoking memories of love. Beautiful! πŸ’™

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Merril πŸ™‚

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  10. I love the memory you created, Lisa! Great poem!

    Yvette M Calleiro πŸ™‚
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Yvette πŸ™‚

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  11. poetisatinta says:

    a beautiful garden a perfect place for love πŸ’ž

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    1. msjadeli says:

      AJ thanks much ❀

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  12. Jules says:

    Ah, a very colorful memory lane – Loverly!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Jules πŸ™‚

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  13. judeitakali says:

    Absolutely adore your word choice.🌻

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Jude! Please send me a link to your blog. When I click on your name or your address here in the comment it says it no longer exists.

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      1. judeitakali says:

        judeitakali.wordpress.com
        πŸ™πŸΎ

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        1. msjadeli says:

          Thank you. It says I am following you, and I just clicked on “show in feed” at your blog so hoping I will start seeing you in my feed again! I am missing your writing.

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          1. judeitakali says:

            πŸ™πŸΎwill be glad to have you reading again πŸ’œ

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  14. I love your tanka and the two images you create with your words. This is a stunning tanka, Lisa. πŸ’›

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Colleen, thank you and happy you like it.

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  15. Anonymous says:

    Beautiful. Puts you right there in the summer πŸ™‚

    Also, great blog layout – the painting and poem side by side!

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    1. Sorry, this is me – forgot to log in!

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    2. msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Elizabeth πŸ™‚

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