Kerfe’s RWG 14 — Mission View

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image by Karen Davis

fluffy hare wet, slinks dew dank moonlight
slips mist smoke, breath quick on her flight
pinpoint cycle that’s quilled with her design
regrets of the wounded all taken in stride
sleep put off as it’s done when all bets ride
time to rest when post-collect’s magic sanctify

words used: 
slink, cycle, regret, breath, bet, wound, smoke, sleep, flight, design, stride, rabbit, ride, collect, rest, light, view, do, fluffy, magic, slip, quill, sanctify

this is an image of a hare and the poem is about a rabbit but I like the image and so am keeping it.  maybe the difference between a rabbit and a hare is a matter of magic?

update on 061923:  I’ve lined out rabbit and replaced with hare (thanks, Jules!)

Kerfe is the host of Random Word Generator wordlist.

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  1. I really like this. And I love the artwork as well.🐇

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Melissa, thanks much. You just never know where these lists will take you. They’re like bread crumbs.

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  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Nicely done Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you! :)

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome

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  3. Well done, a lovely poem.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Robbie, thank you :)

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  4. Jules's avatar Jules says:

    “What’s the Difference Between Rabbits and Hares? For one, they’re separate species—and hares are bigger, have longer ears, and are less social than bunnies.”

    I like your words that frame and wave like sea water around this ‘hare’… it’s the long ears? :D

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Good to know, Jules. Thank you :)

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      1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

        I just like looking stuff up when there’s a question asked :)

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          And it is appreciated. Not sure if you saw I updated the poem??

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          1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

            Awe… I used to know how to line cross out words, but I can’t figure it out now. :(
            Not that I use it often.

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            1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

              It’s on the task bar with the other things.

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              1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

                I didn’t see it in my G-Doc task bar. Maybe it is in the WP Dash taskbar? What is it between.
                From the Bold to the three vertical dots…that lead to some formatting – I don’t see it.

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                1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

                  on WP classic task bar it is an ABC with a a line through it just under where it says paragraph with a drop down menu

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                  1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

                    Thanks – I’ll have to look for it.
                    :)

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  5. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    This is like a spiraling breath–definitely magic. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      <3 I'm glad you feel the magic. On an aside: I got the draft list for POPO today. Things just got real ;)

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      1. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

        I haven’t gotten mine yet. If it doesn’t come this week, I’ll email about it. But I’m still making postcards–I think 10 left to do.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          I think I saw Paul write at the popo fb group that all lists should be sent out by friday. I haven’t made any postcards (yet?) but bought 2 stacks of postcards to choose from. Did you see postage is going up on 7/9?

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          1. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

            Got my list today. Three Canadians! I did see that about the postage. I do have quite a few stamps, but it wouldn’t hurt to buy some more.

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            1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

              Awesome. I have at least one Canadian. Will need to get more…

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  6. selizabryangmailcom's avatar selizabryangmailcom says:

    Well, what can I say? Love it. Having to work with certain words seems a lot more difficult than “just” writing a poem, for sure. I especially loved: “slinks dew dank moonlight slips mist smoke’……
    Oooooooh! Mmm……

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Yay! Thank you, Stacey <3

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  7. selizabryangmailcom's avatar selizabryangmailcom says:

    :)

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  8. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    You did that well with the words you were given! I love that picture.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Max, I do too!

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  9. You did spin the words beautifully, Li! I like the image too.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Punam, thank you very much <3

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  10. selizabryangmailcom's avatar selizabryangmailcom says:

    Hubby immediately found the app and started practicing Spanish it, Li. I guess he hadn’t gotten around to seriously looking for a way to brush up on his lagging first language, ’cause I would have thought he could find this pretty easily. But thanks SO much for mentioning and sharing it, Li!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      <3 <3 <3 Happy to hear it, and you are very welcome, Stacey.

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