Tanka Tuesday 334 — exercise in kigo

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Cool autumn air
sweetens backyard apples
deer midnight snacks

Tinged pear foliage
against mackerel cloud sky
contemplates texture

Crows harass scarecrow
my lantern touches the moon
to the whoosh of wings

Sulphur cosmos sway
hummingbirds hover with bees
autumn’s soft, warm stage

Egret’s still white dots
on early autumn’s green screen
nature’s pause button

First, I went to my favorite kigo site and made a list of them I liked and built the haiku (and micropoetry) from them.
Autumn air
autumn color
mackerel clouds
flower garden
lantern
scarecrow
contemplation
deer midnight apples
egrets still hunt in Michigan ponds
sulphur cosmos
hummingbirds and honeybees

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seedpod of water lily on rooftop at meijer garden. lovely place!

Colleen Chesebro is the host of Tanka Tuesday.  Colleen says:

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Glad you like them, David. Thanks!

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  1. Oh, my goodness… I love them all! Fabulous haiku, Lisa. I like using the kigo words for inspiration. It’s like consulting the Oracle (magnetic poetry) or using word lists to find inspiration. I can’t wait to share the 24 forms and the 24 seasons! Thanks so much, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Happy you like them, Colleen. I am looking forward to your project that’s on the horizon.

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      1. I’m so excited. I think this will be something different and fun, plus super creative. :D

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  2. CHUONTHIS's avatar CHUONTHIS says:

    Beautiful imagery! I especially enjoyed “to the whoosh of wings

    Sulphur cosmos sway”

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Chu :)

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      1. CHUONTHIS's avatar CHUONTHIS says:

        You’re welcome, Lisa 😊

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  3. balroop singh's avatar balroop2013 says:

    Wow! I love how each haiku is connected to the next one! Beautifully done Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Balroop, thank you :)

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  4. destiny's avatar Destiny says:

    beautifully expressed ✨

    my lantern touches the moon
    to the whoosh of wings… 👌🤍

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Destiny :)

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  5. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    I love how you took inspiration from the kigo phrases to create this wonderful piece Lisa 💞

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Ange, thank you. There’s a lot going on in every season, but fall more than most, I think. It’s all happening at once.

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  6. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Excellent! Of course my first immediate favorite is the crows–and a moon too! (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Kerfe, happy you liked that one, I do also :)

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  7. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Beautifully written Li. 🤩😍

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sadje <3

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re welcome ☺️

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  8. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    What a lovely collection heralding the coming autumn.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Dale, thank you and glad you like them.

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      1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

        My pleasure.

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  9. Nice! Autumn will be here before we know it! While Labor Day isn’t the end of summer, the official end (September 23) is only one month out.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Christian, and yes. Isn’t the 21st the changeover of seasons? What, does it fall on a weekend or something so they changed it?

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      1. Sat, Sep 23 is what comes up in Google as the end of summer.😀

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Ah, so Google is telling us when our holidays will fall now. Why doesn’t that surprise me :(

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  10. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    Lovely Lisa… Autumn is by far my favorite season.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you :) Max, the weather is still hot but getting cooler at night, which makes me happy. Autumn is my favorite season also. I’m going to try making zucchini and tomato salsa today. Wish me luck!

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      1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

        I wish you luck! My gumbo turned out great. I’m still eating it for lunch. I’m looking forward to autumn…although this has been a mild summer over all for us.

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  11. Luanne's avatar Luanne says:

    Really beautiful. It’s a little shocking to think of Autumn right now when we are 105 degrees, but it does depend on where we live! You were able to use a lot of kigo for your inspiration!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Luanne. I just couldn’t choose one or two :)

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      1. Luanne's avatar Luanne says:

        The more the merrier!!!

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  12. Gwen M. Plano's avatar Gwen M. Plano says:

    Lovely, Lisa, simply lovely. ❤️

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Gwen, thank you :)

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  13. s.s.'s avatar s.s. says:

    Beautiful 😍

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  14. I can’t decide whether the 2 birds in the main photo are real or not. 🤓 What do you think?

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Oh, they are real. I took the pic. They stand still so the fish/frogs forget they are there :)

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      1. Wow! That’s amazing. Nature always has a way of surprising me. 🤓

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  15. Jules's avatar Jules says:

    So much to love about the arrival of autumn.
    Each season has its gifts :D

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  16. “mackerel cloud sky” what a cool description.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Melissa. I think that is an existing term for a type of cloud and what I saw in the sky seemed to fit it.

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