d’Verse MTB — Darling Nell

Old Babes in the Wood

A woman who knows where she’s been, where she is,
and where she is headed. Darling Nell and Dear Tig
are mirrored, mutually imprinted, souls housed in flesh.

Nell, whose thought caches contain many worlds, spills
memoirs, clears mice nests from boots, and dives into
icy water to retrieve windblown, now sodden, yoga pants.

Tig, a helpmate, appreciator of fine food and rustic cabins
whose daddy returned changed from his helm in the war,
drinking no invisibility potion, slowly fades from this realm.

Tween fore and aft, a big juicy slew of quantum wanders,
from two besties war veterans traumaed in French rurality;

An obnoxious, oppositional teenager nudged along paths
of her developing womanhood by a witch – her mother;

A gathering of feminist overachievers who know each others’
most prized and most detestable qualities — that bond them;

A dead earthworm’s soul crawls into a surprised woman’s
body, which confuses the hell out of the woman’s boyfriend;

A place where lethal viruses effect draconial Handmaidian
measures to coerce the planet into continuing the species;

Nell knows where she’s been, where she is, and where
she is headed. Her magnanimous perspective on it all
makes me a believer that, whatever has been, whatever
things are, and wherever one is headed, it’s all OK.

This poem is about Margaret Atwood’s latest book of short stories, “Old Babes in the Wood.” Much of the book is autobiographical.  Note:  some words are intentionally misspelled, i.e. aren’t considered words in the dictionary.

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Laura is today’s host of dVerse’ Meet The Bar. Laura says:
The topic for today’s MTB prompt is
• go to the last book you bought/read (or make it a favourite one if you can’t remember)
• write a prose poem about it in approx 200-300 words

41 Comments Add yours

  1. the short story element is remarkably drawn in the paragraphs with its Atwoodesque descriptions
    “mirrored, mutually imprinted, souls housed in flesh”

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Laura!

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  2. You make me interested in reading this book. Especially the part about the earthworm crawling into a woman’s body and confusing the hell out of her boyfriend.😂

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Melissa, I hope you do. I regard Atwood a crone of the best kind. You’re a little young for this book generally, but there are a few stories of younger people, including the earthworm one :)

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      1. I’ll definitely check it out! I think I’ve always related with people older than myself. I feel sort of in between generations–slow to pick up new technology, but I obviously missed out on many of the things older generations lived through. I have a hard time relating to people slightly younger than myself. Anyway, I grew up reading Anne Rice books (Vampire Chronicles and Witching Hour). It was around the third grade when my dad thought introducing those was a good idea.😅 I was reading advanced books for my age anyway. I was/am a big fan of the Redwall series by Brian Jacques.

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  3. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    “Tween fore and aft, a big juicy slew of quantum wanders”–I love both the line and the idea. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Kerfe, thank you. I like the line and the idea also.

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  4. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    Sounds like an intense story. I like the way you came full circle at the end. Everything is going to be alright! A good attitude for all of us.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Dwight. It’s a book of short stories and well worth a read. I think you’d like it.

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        You are welcome. I might have to check it out!

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          I’m sure your local library will have it. Easy (and cheap) way to check it out.

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  5. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    That is some great wording and phrasing Lisa…it’s pretty intense.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Max :)

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  6. Wow this sounds interesting and I love how you’ve described this, there is so much in which to delve I think. Also love Tori Amos sounds like something in her realm :) Will be checking this one out.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      It’s a good read, and I love that song! It fits the book well, I think.

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  7. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    I love Margaret Atwood fan but haven’t read this collection yet – now I am determined to do so. I like the structure of your prose poem, Lisa, which reflects the genre. I also love the phrase ‘souls housed in flesh’ and the way each character has a stanza of their own, especially Nell’s. The one that intrigues me is:
    ‘A dead earthworm’s soul crawls into a surprised woman’s
    body, which confuses the hell out of the woman’s boyfriend’.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Kim, I am sure you would appreciate the stories in the book. The earthworm story is a stand alone and a good palate cleanser. It’s also one that has deep metaphorical aspects.

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  8. Reena Saxena's avatar Reena Saxena says:

    The earthworm’s soul shook me out of the poem :) Excellent take on the prompt!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Reena, thanks so much. Knowing what a wise crone Atwood is, she probably threw that story in there knowing people would mention this one in their reviews and be intrigued :)

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  9. I was only looking at this yesterday! You certainly sold it to me, so I’ll have to read it now.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Cool, Jane. Let me know what you think after you read it.

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  10. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

    I like the format of stanzas for short stories. It sounds like an interesting collection. I’ve loved some of her work, and not loved some. I suspect I may feel the same about a collection of stories. Her work is always fascinating though.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Her subject matter is often intense and dark (e.g. The Handmaid’s Tale) but these stories are not, for the most part.

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  11. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    An interestingly inticing poem
    Enjoyed the music video too.

    Much🖤love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Gillena!

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  12. Jim's avatar Jim says:

    Sounds like a fun book to read. First mentoin of “Dear Tig” and I knew he was a nueteted cat like one that I take home for play and him pining out the window to chase a bird.
    I was sooo surprised to figure out later that “Dear Tig” was a girl. Our daughter has a boy cat, nuetered, that acts like a girl. Sits in my lap and purrs.
    Good Job!!! Lisa.
    ..

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Jim, you’re wrong on both. Tig is Nell’s husband. Thanks for reading and guessing.

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  13. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    I haven’t read this yet – but now I am more determined to thanks Lisa ,a great write 💞

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Ange, I hope you get a chance, but I know how it goes with a reading list :)

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    2. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      p.s. Thank you!

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  14. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55 says:

    Lisa, I am reading Margaret Atwood “On Writers and Writing) and discover that she began as a poet and I think you do all justice to her in your Prose Poem Review…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Now that makes me smile, thank you very much for the info :)

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  15. pvcann's avatar pvcann says:

    A tour de force Lisa. Dictionaries be damned (lol).

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Paul many thanks and absoeffinlutely! :)

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  16. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    This is outstanding, Lisa!
    I wanted it to go on and on (thought it did end perfectly)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Dear Dale, thank you. That old bird can write.

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      1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

        That she can!!

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  17. Carol anne's avatar Carol anne says:

    This is awesome Li! I loved your descriptive writing here in this poem! x

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